I wrote this story a few years back I got top marks for it feel free to use it or any ideas you got from it.

Oli was still up in the tree, he threw the ball as far as he could in the direction of his base. Michael picked up the ball and ran it into his base and touched it onto his teams ball, they had won the first game. Billy’s team just stood there wondering how they had lost.

The majority of the foreign army left their base and begun clearing people out of the area. They entered every house that backed onto the park and silently killed people who were occupying the houses. The army was moving closer to the park where all the kids were playing.

The boys were all discussing if the teams should change bases when they heard the scream coming from Michael’s house. Michael ran home to investigate. When Michael didn’t return after a few minutes had passed, they wondered why. So Liam, Ben and Billy climbed a tree to see if they could see into Michaels house, and then they heard the gunshot!

The soldiers ran into the park shooting at everyone. After the soldiers were sure everyone was dead they contacted their base via radio. A minute or so later a helicopter landed on the park and set up tents and made arrangements to provide a second base.

The three boys up in the tree were lucky to survive the attack and they were really scared. They studied the soldiers and agreed that they were from somewhere in Asia. They waited until night fell and then they escaped from the park and ran into the nearest house. They frantically tried to contact the police, the phone was ringing and ringing and they started to worry that they would be caught any minute. Finally the police phone was answered but the police sergeant didn’t believe them and thought it was a prank call. The boys kept calling the police until finally they sent an officer to the park. The soldiers also shot him, but he was able to radio in that the boys were telling the truth and that the area was under attack.

The soldiers entered the house just as the boys hung up. The soldiers realised immediately that these boys had contacted the police, the boys were taken as hostages and were very lucky not to be shot on the spot. The soldiers soon realised there was one fatal error in their plan, the SAS were based in Western Australia. With the realisation of this error, the soldiers commenced a full attack immediately, they had to move quickly if their mission was to be a success.

The invasion has begun…

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