60 word story.

Ben walked down the mall’s atrium still fuming. He couldn’t believe his wife was cheating on him. That’s it. He would put an end to it tonight. He would kill the guy. Guns in a public place have a character to themselves, Ben thought.

Turned out the other guy thought he was the husband. He had a gun there too.

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  • Puja on Nov 15, 2009

    Nice!! Bullet for Bullet! :P

  • vishakha on Nov 15, 2009

    :) hahaa…..Good one!!

  • Sharif Ishnin on Nov 15, 2009

    Expect the unexpected. Nice one.

  • crucisis on Nov 15, 2009

    thank you Sharif, vishakha and Puja.

  • drelayaraja on Nov 16, 2009

    Very good stuff.

  • crucisis on Nov 16, 2009

    thanks drelayaraja

  • V rank on Nov 17, 2009

    You nailed it to tell a story using limited words…

  • crucisis on Nov 17, 2009

    thanks franklin.

  • karan on Dec 19, 2009

    Hahaah nice what a bitch hahahah

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