A final visit home for a class reunion and recollections of some folks long gone.

Hmmmm, I smiled.  Ghosties in high spirits.  I kept that to myself not knowing for sure if Milly was keen on wry humor.   “I don’t know what to tell you, girl.  My kind of work didn’t lend itself to this sort of situation.”

“There’s one other thing.  One morning this jacket was left on the back of one of the chairs.”  She handed me a denim coat.

I held it a minute, then returned it and said, “That’s Sven Johannsen’s jacket.”

“You’re crazy,” she shouted, causing Dolly to turn around. ” Sven’s been dead since before I was born.”

“Don’t care,” I answered.  “When I was a boy too young to play I would kibitz and when one of the old farmers got ready to leave he’d say ‘Kenny, go git my coat, will ye,?’ and there’d be 12 or 14 identical denim jackets hanging on nails and I’d pick the right one every time just by smell.  This is Sven’s.  He’s the only one who rolled Carter Hall pipe tobacco.  Here, you can still smell it.”

She agreed there was a tobacco odor on the coat.

“I’ll tell you something else.  Sven doesn’t come in here alone.  There are two others.  You see, Sven only knew how to play pinochle.  Only two other men in town knew how to play pinochle–the postmaster and the insurance man–all long since passed away.  They always played three-handed pinochle and that’s the trio who takes chairs down and drinks your  sherry.”

Millie was wringing her hands.   “What are we goin’ to do?”

“There’s nothing you can do that I know of,” I advised, “except always keep a good supply of cooking sherry on hand.”  I laughed.  She did not.

It wasn’t long till I could see the old home town grow ever smaller in my rear view mirror and I knew that would be the last time I would ever see it.  That is, unless I come back 40 or 50 years from now to play some cards.  There is a vacant seat.  Naw.  I forgot.  I don’t know how to play pinochle.

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  • Lostash on Jul 19, 2009

    Another great piece of story-telling Ken. You make feel as though I’m there with you on these trips.

  • Deep Blue on Jul 19, 2009

    Just like Stephen Kings’s “Sometime’s They Come Back”. A well written account.

  • Sky Lumina on Jul 19, 2009

    creepy…^^

  • chitragopi on Jul 19, 2009

    very interesting

  • Sheila M on Jul 19, 2009

    It did remind me of that Stephen King story too. Love this. I heard pinochle is a difficult game~

  • Daisy Peasblossom on Jul 19, 2009

    A good reminder that home is what we make of it; and we go where our heart is.

  • Tanya Wallace on Jul 19, 2009

    You are a phenominal storyteller,I love the stories about crooked springs but I think this is now my favorite.As always Ken brillaint work!I clearly had a picture of you in your truck driving away looking in the rearview.I honestly think this would make a great television series.

  • ladybaby on Jul 19, 2009

    Your stories are great. I love them.

  • Ruby Hawk on Jul 19, 2009

    Ken, you are right, we can’t go home again but we can visit the old home place. It’s sad for me to go back but I can’t avoid it. I still have sisters there. I loved your ghosties.

  • PR Mace on Jul 19, 2009

    You have a great story-telling talent. I do love your ghost stories. But you are correct, you can’t really go home again. Both my parents are in heaven and I don’t think I will ever return to my hometown again. I have no further reason to go there and for me the place holds a lot of bad memories.

  • riccardof on Sep 6, 2009

    I enjoyed this story–it reminds me of returning to Wernersville, PA after 30 years. Of course all the old stores and little restaurants were long gone but not the peacefulness of the Valley.

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