Listening to gossip has ruined more than one marriage. If you’re one of the lucky ones, it makes you stronger.

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She stared at the phone in disbelief.  How long had she been standing there, glass shattered on the floor and the phone in her hand?  Long enough for the cola stain to spread beneath her feet, anyway, and her socks were soaked now.  That made her angry, and she ripped them off and threw them across the room.

She should call Betsy back, she new.  Betsy would be frantic wondering if she fainted, or broke the phone, or had a heart attack.  She didn’t want to talk anymore, though, not right now.  That was wrong, she knew – and if she didn’t call, Betsy would be coming over to check on her.  That was much worse.  She dialed the number quickly.

“Claire!  What happened?  Are you all right?” gasped Betsy on the second ring.

“I’m fine, Betsy.  Thanks for letting me know,” answered Claire.

“Well, what are you going to do?  I hate to be the bearer of bad news, you know that, Hon.  I just felt you needed to know what Tom was up to.  He seems so wonderful and all, but to go out on you like this, parading that girl all around town….”

“I know.”  Claire cut her off harshly before she could get rolling again.  “Look, I don’t want to talk right now, OK?  I’ll call you later, I promise.”

“But Hon,” began Betsy, but Claire had already hung up the phone.

Tom and Claire had married three months ago on a sunny Autumn New England day.  It had been a hasty wedding, for Tom’s job relocated him across the country and they only had a short time to finish the move.  Claire’s best friend Sara was her maid of honor, and had worked miracles putting everything together and making the day magic.  Then she had driven them to the airport, hugged them both hard, and waved cheerily as they headed for a new life in Oregon. 

It had rained every day since, and though Tom’s job was going well, Claire could not get settled in.  How she missed Sara!  How she longed for the crisp October skies and crackling leaves of home!  Everything here was sodden; and Betsy, the landlady, was the only woman she knew.  Tom was a wonderful man, gentle and caring and oh, so patient… and, evidently, having an affair with a beautiful blonde.

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  • Katie Marie on Sep 23, 2009

    A wonderful write for the challenge my friend and a very good lesson as well.

  • Atanacio on Sep 23, 2009

    A very good entry… so let them eat crow — fitting title too :) Cheers

  • Yovita Siswati on Sep 23, 2009

    Good message! Great article.

  • diamondpoet on Sep 23, 2009

    People are mean and cruel, sometime even a friend will lead you in the wrong direction because he or she is jealous. Always go to the source first before jumping to conclusions. Great story, is it true?

  • maranatha on Sep 23, 2009

    No, thank God – because my temper has landed me in a few tight spots! Just not this one.

    My hubby was the jealous one, and we had a couple of st-to\’s in the beginning that taught us valuable lessons. that was 31 years ago. we weathered the storms beautifully, and learned never to listen to other folks\’ ramblings!

  • Diverseblogger on Sep 23, 2009

    This is a very nice and meaningful piece. :)

  • Judy Sheldon on Sep 23, 2009

    What a beautifully woven tale. I loved it.

  • Adam Henry Sears on Sep 24, 2009

    Great job, Maranatha. Well-written! The ending could use a tiny bit more organizing, expanding, and follow-through, but the rest is very involving for the reader and even though some of your adjectives are a little overdone, your narrative style and depth are enough to move the reader and carry her/him through to the end.
    Great job, and take care.

  • T.Rex McGoogle on Sep 24, 2009

    Very well written complex tale from M. Entertaining as usual.

  • jomom2323 on Sep 24, 2009

    lOVED THIS STORY!!!

  • Brenda Nelson on Sep 29, 2009

    thanks for the happy ending – we dont see too many of those.

  • David Crerand on Sep 30, 2009

    Great story. Well written. I enjoyed reading it. Good response to Duff’s challenge. Week after week you seem to step it up a notch!

  • Duff D Moss on Sep 30, 2009

    Hah – that was great – you could make a decent chick flick out of this :-)

  • fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa on Oct 1, 2009

    This is truly a great story, especially since it happens all the time, gossip can ruin a lot of relationship, its a good thing she had not left before her husband and her BLONDE best friend arrived.
    Great Story

  • Karen Gross on Oct 19, 2009

    This is a great story! And even if it is fiction, I hope God takes your words to someone who is in danger of ruining a great relationship because of gossip, lies, and miscommunications.

    Like the old saying goes: “Don’t shoot till you see the whites of their eyes.”

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