A lovers retreat, where the moon and sun meet.

The full moon hung in the obsidian sky, its pale light reflecting off the ocean. Mi-Na sat on the sandy floor, gazing up at the the magical orb, lost in thought. A face appears on the moon, his dark brown eyes drowning her in melancholy. Hwang, her subconscious whispered. He was so much like the moon: beautiful, stoic, enigmatic, and unattainable. She was just a mere mortal, unable to reach him. All she could do was pine for him from afar.

A cool breeze suddenly blew, causing her to shiver. She heard footsteps in the sand behind her, coming closer and closer until it stopped right next to her. Without looking, she knew it was him. Hwang quietly sat down next to her, gazing at the same moon. Mi-Na casts a sidelong glance at him, her eyes tracing his handsome profile. He was simply magnificent, taking her breath away. Just looking at him now, it was hard to imagine how far he had come, or how much suffering he overcame. He was an orphan boy, whose poor but hardworking parents died so young. He grew up in a cruel world, working so hard, training relentlessly, quickly rising the ranks to become one of Joseon’s best and elite warriors, garnering respect and awe. He was a proud soldier, and rightfully so. She places her head on his shoulder, as he wraps a muscular arm around her.

“When do you depart?” Mi-Na quietly asks.

“At sunrise.”

Mi-Na felt tears welling up in her eyes as she clung to him tighter. This wasn’t new. She knew this was coming, but it still hurt, and it hurt like hell.

“Please don’t cry, Mi-Na. You know I’ll come back.”

“How do you know that you’ll be back!” Mi-Na cried out, her voice choking. Fate had been so cruel, taking her brother and mother, leaving her and her father alone. She feared that it would take Hwang as well.

“Trust me Mi-Na,” Hwang whispered, wiping her tears away. “As long as you live and breathe, I will comeback. Be strong, my Mi-Na, for it gives me strength.”

“Can’t I go with you? I’ll fight by your side —”

Hwang silenced her with a kiss, tasting her tears. He feels her hand underneath his shirt, touching his bare chest. He gently lays her down, looking into her sad eyes.

“Your father needs you here with him, Mi-Na. You are all he has left. Promise me that you will stand by him.”

Mi-Na nods her head. “Just don’t about forget us.”

“Never, my sweet. Never.”

Slowly, underneath the pale moon, love unfolds in the night.

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  • Sourav on Oct 29, 2009

    Nice write!

  • martinpm on Oct 29, 2009

    enjoyed reading the story.

  • ken bultman on Oct 29, 2009

    This is and has been such a beautiful love story. There must be some of the author in it.

  • Shirley Shuler on Oct 29, 2009

    Hi Lady Sunshine, thank you for more of Mina and Hwang, my two favorite people and I agree with ken bultman!

  • papaleng on Oct 30, 2009

    Very romantic and nice imagery.

  • johnnydod on Oct 30, 2009

    Brilliant story sunshine, wow your good, wonderful use of word and prose…. thanks

  • Jane Jane on Oct 30, 2009

    lovely story. I too agree with ken.

  • T. S. GARP on Oct 30, 2009

    Timeless love….great story!

  • Melody SJAL on Oct 31, 2009

    A totally passionate love story.

  • deep blue on Oct 31, 2009

    I like love stories especially those told by creative lady writers. Hmmmnnn, a lot of secrets had been uncovered by the pale moonlight.

  • Teves on Nov 7, 2009

    Great story…

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