This is my first 2nd person story, be kind please.

You were sitting around the campfire with your brother. It was frigged cold out side as the sun hasn’t raised in three days. The only light was the radiation emitting from the ground, but that was very dangerous to get near. You were getting ready for the attack the next day.

“You know,” your brother spoke in a hushed voice, “it has been days sincethe sun came up, I hope they haven’t done anything too harsh to the energy.”

“But you know those scientists want nothing more then all the power they can get, I wouldn’t be surprised if the sun  burns out all together!”

“That is why we must act quickly and quietly.”

The conversation ended, and both of you fell asleep quickly, it was a long day, you hiked 35 miles to the lab.

The next day you woke up and found yourself in a strange room in strange clothes. There was nothing in the room, just white walls about 15fx15f with no windows and no door to be seen. There was a camera on in the top corner though. “Subject 2 is awake,” you heard a familiar voice, but you decided it was nothing “get it to the judge immediately.” Part of the wall to your left made a indent and slided open, two white coated men walked in and grabbed you. They dragged you out side and found you in a long blank hallway, it seems the cell doors aren’t noticeablefrom the out side either. The men half walked, half dragged you through the very long hallway until you reached what seemed like a dead end. The wall opened just like the cell wall did and the men dragged you through it. In your new room, there was a man sitting behind a white desk with two white chairs in front of it.

“Please, sit down,” you did as told, “and what just makes you think you can plot against us with no consequences?”

You couldn’t talk.

“Now both you and your brother are going to be in lock down for two months, and then you will be sentenced to death.”

You still couldn’t find any words to say.

“What’s the matter? Cats got you tongue?” he chuckled and flicked his large tail you just noticed. You were totally freaked out by the tail, you almost got up and ran. Instead the men from before injected you with some sort of fluid with a needle and you passed out.

You woke up in a room similar to your cell, but bigger, your brother was laying next to you, still asleep. There is no way to tell the time or date, but it feels as though you haven’t ate in a week “Subject 2 is awake,” it was the same voice as before, “send it food.” just then part of the “door” opened and a tray came through the small opening.

“Eat up,” chuckled another voice “this is your last meal.”

That must mean you were asleep for 2 months. Your brother makes a moaningsound.”Subject 1 is awake, send him some food.” The same thing happened as with you.

“I’m glad to see you again,” Your brother was almost smiling, “The cat man told me I only had 2 months to live, doesn’t that put me asleep for 2 months?”

“I don’t know what this all means” you really had no idea what was going on. “all I know is, we must have meat the same “judge” guy and were both sentenced to death, am I right?

“Probably. So, do you have a plan?”

“As a matter of fact, I do…”

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