A story of a man who can’t focus (warning for all those used to humorous stories from me … this is not one of them).

Evan glanced at the lower right corner of his flat panel screen and saw that it was 5:02pm. 

“Time to go!” he thought, both weary and relieved.  He hadn’t gotten anything done at work — same as yesterday, same as the day before that — and that bothered him immensely.  He used to love going in to work.  In fact, he could remember the days when he was eager to get to the office early and get the day rolling.  Times had changed.  His highlight of the day was when he turned off his office light and headed out the door.  He was so happy to get out of there, The Trap, where he had spent nearly every day of the past thirty years doing the same job at the same desk.

With his wife and kids out of town, Evan knew this was his opportunity to get some projects done around the house, and to do some of that writing he’s wanted to do for a long time.  He wanted his wife and kids to be amazed at how much he achieved in the week that they were gone.  He could picture it:  ”Evan, how did you do all this?” his wife would say, while his kids would smile in amazement and say, “Wow Dad, you’re great!.”

On his way home, he took a left at the light when he should have gone straight, and he realized he had been daydreaming about bowling.  His inadvertent left turn brought him to right in front of the bowling alley.   He pulled into the parking lot and checked his wallet.  He had enough cash for a few games, and then some.

“I can relax a little before I start the projects at home.  This will be kind of fun!”

Evan spent the next two hours on Lane 25.  He bowled ten games.  He would have bowled more but he was running out of cash.

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He felt a bit disappointed in himself as he was leaving the bowling alley, knowing he could have accomplished quite a bit at home by this time.  Plus, he had spent nearly $35 bowling.  Money was tight these days, and he realized he had been frivolous.

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  • Mr Ghaz on Jul 1, 2009

    Wonderful story!!..very attractive and well written as well..I always enjoyed reading your work.Well done and thanx for sharing this great work.

  • Katie Marie on Jul 1, 2009

    No, not funny at all. Way to easy to put myself in that story.

  • Westbroook on Jul 1, 2009

    Joel, It was a good story of a man who did everything to distract his mind from work (and maybe from any responsibilities). There have been tough periods in my life when I procrastinated in the same manner. As I was reading this story, however, I was sure the guy was going to fall victim to something bad, but it ended with the cycle starting over.

  • Westbrook on Jul 1, 2009

    oops… I had a heavy finger when entering my name above and I did not enter my Id.

  • Alina Beck on Jul 1, 2009

    Oh dear, I recognise all too many of these procrastinating techniques!

  • Kate Smedley on Jul 1, 2009

    A strong message Joel that we should all heed, time passes too quickly and at times we all need to focus to make sure we don’t drift. Very nicely done.

  • BullwinkleMuse on Jul 1, 2009

    You struck a nerve with that one, Joel. We assume tomorrow, never knowing how much time we’ve really got. A truck crashed into my living room today; right where my wife would be sitting had she been at home. I thank you for this message.

  • chanbox on Jul 1, 2009

    great story. Don’t take life for granted.

  • clay hurtubise on Jul 3, 2009

    Perhaps his aunt could set him straight!
    Thanks,
    clay

  • sheba on Jul 11, 2009

    Very good story! Thanks for sharing!

  • CutestPrincess on Jul 20, 2009

    a nice story to tell…

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