My version of snow white that got my little cousins actually considering if i’ve gone mad ha ha..

One day her wish was fulfilled and the Queen and King named her Snow White. The Queen died when she got into a chariot pileup, and soon her husband remarried. He remarried a beautiful pheasant woman. Soon after she became Queen, and so very vain. She could not stand nor bare the thought of a soul being more beautiful than she. She grew jealous of her step-daughter and demanded that the fisherman drown Snow White. The king was aware of the conspiracy, so he followed the fisherman without being noticed. He jumped him and paid him off with a goat and two chickens. The fisherman took one of Snow White’s shoes and dipped it in the water as proof of her drowning. The King then took his daughter, and went looking in the forest till he found a cottage. He asked her to hide in the house and went back to the castle.

Walking through the larger doorway Snow White saw a strange sight. For this was no ordinary cottage. From outside the cottage seemed to be two levels… but as she looked up she saw a high ceiling. Then she saw seven giant beds, and humongous furniture throughout the house. Snow White was so very tired and climbed up the edge of one of the sheets that barely touched the floor so she could get to the top to sleep on one of the beds. The Seven Giants came home and said there is an odd smell. Snow White being so tired did not awaken to their stomping around. The Green Giant saw her on the Blue Giant’s bed. She barely took up half the bed! The Giants argued as to who would wake her up, however she awoke to the low rumble of the whispering voices. She told them her story, and upon hearing it they warned her that the Queen might find out the truth, and come after her again. So, they warned her that in their absence she should not let anybody in.

Back at the castle after a few days the Queen was invited to a party so she checked with her mirror, asking her favourite question: “Mirror Mirror that I hold, who is the fairest of them all!?”. The mirror replied “You try so hard yet to no avail, Snow White is still the fairest of them all.” Upon the Queen leaving in a fury the mirror told the King of what has happened. The King realized the Queen would try to finish what she started, so he warned the seven Giants of the danger to come. Just before going to work the seven Giants asked their Chief, who seemed to enjoy plants and their capabilities (no one liked being around during his experiments, to guard her. Just as they thought, the Queen came pretending to be a poor lady asking for a handout. When Snow White opened the door the lady sprayed something in the girl’s face. The Giant’s Chief realized it was a poisonous gas, and was able to save the girl. Also, he was able to toss some of the herbs he was mixing together on the Queen without her knowing. The Queen went back to her castle feeling so good thinking that she killed Snow White.

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  • bryan on Jul 11, 2008

    good twist

  • maria on Aug 18, 2008

    nice twist on the story… kinda funny

  • Nathette on Oct 18, 2008

    Great twist in the story!

  • rkrish on Nov 13, 2008

    nice twist and superb

  • Abdul Sabour Ayoubi on Nov 17, 2008

    Well written story, thanks for sharing hopefully we see more of these kinds of beautiful stories in the furture.

  • Not Telling You on Jan 22, 2009

    In my school we have to write a story about snow white with a twist so i will just copy and paste this! NOT!
    i am not cheetah!

  • not telling you on Jul 31, 2009

    yo bro this is a really badddddddddddd story could improve heaps

  • Aaaa on Aug 17, 2010

    HI

  • SALMA on Sep 12, 2010

    nice twist

  • aibel on Jan 4, 2012

    well…….it vas gud nd i liked de twist..kinda funnt..even :-)

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