It’s a great story I made. Hope you like it!

“Get your cell phone out and call the cops,” says Joe.

“Okay” says Rachael. Rachael takes out her cell phone and dialed 911.

The firefighters had extinguished Rachael’s house in about half an hour, though her belongings were now ashes.

“Thank you,” said Rachael thankfully.

Rachael had just escaped death—just narrowly.

6

Jake was driving his car to San Francisco trying to get away from his friends as far away as possible, for he thought they would cause his death.

Jake thought, there’s no Fate, it’s all a lie. I can tell one of them is killing everybody. Looks like its Peter. Well, who cares anyway, I’m out of here! Eventually, he was halfway to San Francisco . There was a large range of mountains in his way, so he had to cross it.

Some time later he got to a rather high point, where if he made a right turn, he would die. The entire road was deserted because this road was closed due to dangerous rock falls. Jake did not see the sign because he was too busy reading his map. Jake’s car rumbled noisily over the rocky road. There was no other noise than this until there was a sharp cracking sound from above. What was that, thought Jake. Crack! There was a deep rumbling sound; it was a giant boulder coming down the side of the mountain where Jake was right next to. The boulder was rolling down the mountain unnaturally fast, about to crush Jake and his car. Jake rammed down the gas pedal, speeding greatly. Jake narrowly missed the boulder.

“Ha! I cheated my own death! What now! Yeah baby,” whooped Jake. But he said it too soon… “Oh ye-“His car suddenly bounced. VVRRRRRRRRRRRR! VVRRRRRR! Jake pushed down on the gas pedal but his car wouldn’t budge. He poked his out of the window-he was trapped in a massive pothole that the boulder had created. His car had gotten trapped in a pot hole that the colossal boulder created. There was a large cracking sound from above…another boulder.

“Oh my god!” screamed Jake.

The boulder hit the side of car tearing the door off and making him bounce off the edge of the cliff. There was an ear-piercing scream of horror. And then silence, utterly silence, unnatural silence. Fate had claimed just another victim whose next?

7

Fate had wanted the next two victims to go by smoothly.

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  • Nobody on Nov 11, 2006

    It’s awsome; Is this all?

  • dsvf on Nov 11, 2006

    Graet

  • the creator of this story on Jul 11, 2007

    i think this is it maybe ill make it better and longer (like 200 pages) and publish it. I wrote this when I was a kid, so in my spare time I took the liberty of typing up my “parchment” (paper) which was supposed top be an assignment at school… It gets kinda of not so good at the end because i was in a hurry to get it done or id get an f. sorry if theres mistakes or if its not so good

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