It was a home that captivated my father. Here I was, trying to take it all away.

       I glanced around uncomfortably, trying to ignore the bothersome ticking of the grandfather clock.  Finally, I asked:

       “Don’t you ever get tired of this place?” He looked around.

       “Not really…”

       “Oh,” I replied, not meaning to say anything.

       “Why?”  

       “Well, I just thought that after a while, with the same schedule, you’d want a change.”

       “Why would I want a change? I’m happy here. Mary comes to visit me most every day with Shirley,” I looked at my watch, once remembering when the poodle had snatched it out of my hand and had ended up breaking it. Mary had apologized numerous times and no matter how many “It’s okay, really,” she kept on persisting on making it up. I had no choice but to allow her to take me shopping for a new watch.  Luckily, this one has survived.  

       “You have somewhere to be?” he asked me, clinking his glass of tea down on the table.

       “Actually, no,” I smiled.

       “What ever happened to your ‘big’ articles you had to write?” He eyed me playfully. I chuckled quietly.  

       “The newspaper doesn’t keep me prisoner, you know?” I rhetorically asked. “I’m allowed to take a brake once in a while. I just choose to spend it with you.  Do you have a problem with that?”

       “No, I just that thought—“

       “Enough about me dad. I want to hear from you. It’s been how long since I last saw you?”

       “3 months,” he quickly answered. I bit my lip, feeling a wave of guilt hit me. I had been so consumed by work that I had completely forgotten my own father.  How terrible of a daughter was I?

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  • Charlie on Nov 27, 2008

    This is great! It has such a homely feel to it. And all through out the story, I could imagine everything.

  • Bob Dylan on Nov 27, 2008

    i hope this is not coming from your life view, ha ha
    this is great i really feel as if i am one of the people in the story.

  • Morgan on Nov 27, 2008

    This is a great example of how good a writer you are. Never stop writing! You have a ton of talent.

  • Christian on Nov 27, 2008

    Your so Talented, Ms. Bo Beather.
    I Love this one, Keep it up!

  • Neil on Nov 27, 2008

    You are a very talented writer. I hope to see you in the future on bookshelves and more!

  • Natasha on Dec 8, 2008

    Ya know..I was here not too long ago, but didn’t leave a message and I see a TON of people have beat me :( OH wells. :D I love you keep it up!

  • tori on Dec 9, 2008

    it was great girly you know i love your stuff

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