Fear surrounds me regarding things I don’t understand and I’m frozen from taking action.

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What lurks in the darkness, beyond the fields and touching the tree line? I know something is out there and it is as dangerous as my mind will permit. It’s as if there is a force, a shield perhaps that prevents me from venturing further. I must retreat to the safety of my home.

As a 10 year old boy I experienced real fear on a late summer evening in a run down neighborhood in Syracuse, NY. My Aunt and Uncle had to run into a grocery store and left me in the car. I was fine and had all the windows rolled down just people watching and it was a good thing I was watching. Out of the darkness appeared a very large, scary looking and extremely drunk older man. He was aimlessly wandering around the store parking lot when he suddenly spotted me.  Like a gorilla, with arms swaying, he started approaching the car I was in. I screamed, but no sound. I tried again, yet still nothing came out. He kept coming toward me.

I leaped over the back seat into the front and feverishly rolled up the two front windows. He moved from one side of the car to the other. Still trying to scream I couldn’t make any noise. The crazed man stealthily approached the rear of the car. I looked at the front of the store and I could see my Uncle at the cash register. Please help  me I wanted to say, but it was to no avail. Everything was normal for my Uncle as I could see him laughing with the cashier. “Hey, look out here, I’m in trouble and I need you,” I was saying, but no words would come out. I rolled up the rear window on the driver’s side. Still undeterred the ogre crept along to the rear passenger side. I just knew that if he got me he was going to really hurt me. As I frantically started to roll the window up he thrust his fat hand inside to snare me. Faster, faster I rolled until I had his fingers securely lodged in the window. He looked at me, then his hand and he was enraged and in disbelief. 

I felt somewhat in control of the situation as a taxi cab pulled up and witnessed my dilemma. The cab driver opened up his back door and yanked the filthy monster from my trap and threw him into his cab. Finally my Uncle saw the tail end of this horror show and came running outside, but he was too late. The evilness that lurked in the darkness had disappeared just as quickly as he had reared his ugliness. I was safe!

My voice didn’t return for two more days and still 49 years later there are times the darkness fills me with one question….will I find my voice if the demons materialize in the blackness of night?

Written By: Dennis L. Page

http://relijournal.com/religion/peace-on-the-water

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  • Spencer Hawken on Oct 20, 2010

    Amazing the things that happen to us in our lives, thanks for the share!

  • PaulB on Nov 18, 2010

    Only one other comment? That’s because they are still hiding under the sofa! Gripping little story, or rather, NEARLY gripping.

  • hfj on Nov 18, 2010

    This was a very entertaining story, and well written to boot. Some events that happen in our early lives, help mold the person we end up being as adults. Well done friend.

  • ceegirl on Nov 21, 2010

    lovely story

  • LOVELYHONEY on Nov 22, 2010

    u r sir
    are such a natural writer ,
    who has the knack to know,
    the key words of the day
    and so the readers
    ought to know
    which way the key words flow
    but alas the words
    cash and encash
    and
    flow away each day
    newer words come alive
    as key words they say

    show me the door
    to find my pathway ,
    so that i may too
    keywords like you display.

  • Likha on Nov 27, 2010

    I like how you presented this. It kept me hanging on till the last word. I hope you are recovering from your childhood trauma.

  • nz2rdfox on Dec 20, 2010

    great story…so sad that it happened to you..anyways, hope you have finally recovered from such traumatic stage of your life:)

    God bless and Happy holidays:)

  • LewSethics on Mar 23, 2011

    No you won’t, and don’t wonder if the dark creepy things are real, because they lurk just behind your neck, and if you turn real fast you might be able to see one, but I don’t think you really would want to, they are scary as all hell to look at, and get real mad if they think you saw them, and claw your eyes out while they scream your name with a voice that sounds something like a horse, or maybe not.
    Have a nice day.
    (I so intended that to be funny but somehow it got control of me and that’s what we ended up with. Damned fingers.)

  • MountainGirl on Mar 24, 2011

    Wow, you really are an amazing writer. Love it how you put your words together.

  • KittyK on May 24, 2011

    I felt as though I was in that car as well, as your story was very involving… What a horrible experience!

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