A cautionary tale of doing business with criminals.

I have moved millions of dollars worth of merchandise, all of it illegal and dangerous, but I had never moved something as big as the velvet gloves before. It arrived the way of most of my merchandise, in the back of semi truck late at night. I waited for the shipment standing in the freezing cold waiting for the truck to arrive. At least I got to be inside the warehouse and out of the snow. Too bad there was no heating unit in the place. It was a half hour late, another ten minutes and I would have assumed the law had gotten on to us and fled the building. The battered truck rolled up, the diesel engine spitting out noxious fumes and making way more noise than I wished.

I gave the driver a glowering look that would have boiled an egg right in its shell. I motioned for him to back the truck up to the loading bay and motioned for the forklift guy to get ready. No one wanted to be out here in the cold unloading goods that could cost you five to seven years; if it was your first time getting caught. No one took to kindly to gun runners these days, tougher laws were meant to keep me and my kind behind bars longer. Of course we learned our trade and made our connections in prison. Most of us didn’t start off as smugglers, we started off as petty crooks who got caught, sent to prison and learned a new trade. You have to love a system that rehabilitates you from one crime and educates for a new profession.

The truck smacked back into the rubber padding and came to a stop. I took a key that had been mailed to me a week earlier that fit the lock. Walking briskly I approached the door and and put the key into the lock. I hesitated prior to turning the key, McPherson had not said what the contents of the truck were, only that he needed to get them out of his warehouse and somewhere safe for a few weeks. I wasn’t so much worried about the law, I was worried about the cargo being dangerous to me. McPherson had never endangered me yet, so I unlocked the lock and flung the door up. I shone a flashlight into the dim interior of the truck and saw four long pallets loaded in. Somehow I expected a larger cargo to come. I walked over and inspected the first pallet, it was a little over twelve feet long and five feet tall. The markings identified it as Canadian.

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  • Darla Cooke on Jun 2, 2009

    This is a very interesting story. I really enjoyed reading it.

  • Bullwinkle Muse on Jun 3, 2009

    I’d like to see you script a 40’s ‘film noir’ caper movie, a la Mickey Spillane. Nice work, Andrew.

  • Andrew Davies on Jun 3, 2009

    Thanks BM, I am not particularly skilled at doing scripts though, as I am sure you saw with John Bishop. I prefer stories.

  • Bo Russo on Jun 8, 2009

    Andy,the strangest one so far,but it was pretty funny but the time it was done.

  • hfj on Jun 8, 2009

    Nice story Andrew. I guess we’ll have to wait for the next challenge to find out how you got rid of the missiles, right. Well done.

  • rutherfranc on Jun 8, 2009

    great suspense.. maybe you can use Duff`s title on his challenge piece when you dispose of them..

  • Duff D Moss on Jun 8, 2009

    I think the fed’s have got an eye on you now. Secret messages on writing forums – trying to unload some super hot merchandise :-) Thanks for contributing to the challenge dude. Hope you have a go in the next round too.

  • RS Wing on Jun 17, 2009

    great story , very interesting read…love these kind of tales/truths….it gives you a sense of beating the sytem until they beat you….I would launch the whole load right up his arse….nice work

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