Here you will read some stories that will touch your heart/ A fantasy that happens in reality. Five short stories that will bring happiness and sadness.

The “doll house” to revenge or to love?

One night, from his playing house, she saw hooligans attacked her family. Her father was killed by a shot in a head, Her mother was raped by shameless hooligans and got killed while her brother was murdered by shots in his heart. She was crying inside her big doll house. She saw and heard everything… The sounds of laughter and the irritating voice. After that incident, she’s never a child again. The only thing she has was her doll, her companion on the days of  her nightmare. The only thing on her mind was the incident.. The flash scenes of the incident. The sounds of the gun reverberate in her ears. The laughter of the hooligans slowly crashing and destroying her heart. The word “revenge” marked her heart with anger. Everyday the face of the hooligans got clearer and clearer. The sounds of the gun got louder and louder. She will grow up with the images of violence. After a years, she became a businesswoman… a powerful businesswoman that hardened by time. Her heart became “stone”. She worked everyday to forget what happened, to erase the misery she suffered and still suffering… unti she fell in love with the guy, a guy who changed everything about her, a guy who made her feel that she was not alone in this ruthless world… One day the guy asked her to marry him. The girl said “yes”  without any hesitations… as a result they planned to visit the house of her future husband… She was shocked on what she saw. The nightmare of the past came back, the memories of the incident shocked again her heart. She remembered everything when she was on her doll house. And now the day she’s been waiting for arrived. She saw the ”demon” who killed her loved ones! But the ”demon” she’s talking about was the father of her future husband, the guy who taught her how to love again… What will she choose? To revenge or to love the guy forever? (to be contined…)

“I’m sorry, I don’t know.” I love you too

Before her 18th birthday, the girl wished to her boy friend a diamond ring. Her boyfriend promised that he would buy a ring. The girl was very happy. She went to salon to have some make-over to look beautiful on her birthday. She bought make-ups, new clothes and new shoes. The night she’s been waiting for arrived. She look elegant, gorgeous, the dream girl of every man. Everybody was focused on her. The party started when her boyfriend arrived… with a  simple doll… The girl got mad at her boyfriend. She thought that he would give her a  diamond ring instead of a doll, she threw the doll. The guy ran as fast as he could to save the doll. But a car hit him…he died in hospital after a few hours. The girl felt very sorry, she cried every minute when she remembered everything. In the burial the girl had remembered the good things happened to them… she hugged the doll tightly..full of love and regret… She was shocked when the doll talked and said “ Happy birthday baby, will you marry me? get the ring on the doll’s pocket hope you like it. I LOVE YOU”.  The girl went outside and shouted “I’m sorry baby! I don’t know I love you too!”

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  • nobert soloria bermosa on May 6, 2008

    nice article, keep writing

  • ryan on May 6, 2008

    nice one!

  • lyra on May 6, 2008

    sounds cool nice! i hope there’s part 2

  • Mae on May 7, 2008

    A good read!

  • danny fang on May 8, 2008

    great!

  • grace washington on May 8, 2008

    i like the plot of the stories nice!

  • michael howard on May 8, 2008

    two thumbs up!

  • reyugico on May 8, 2008

    nice article hope i can write my own!

  • reyugico on May 8, 2008

    pilipino rin ako patulong naman kung paano
    half koreano and pilipino

  • mark on May 8, 2008

    text me ok? thank for reading my article

  • grace on May 12, 2008

    nice!

  • jhon rey on Jun 11, 2008

    nice article!

  • kevin on Jun 11, 2008

    keep it up!

  • robert balmon on Jun 11, 2008

    great article! touching

  • ming on Sep 18, 2008

    hey mark, are you from the philippines?

  • mark on Oct 4, 2008

    yes i am

  • vivien on Oct 27, 2008

    …… havE you considered writing pocketbookS?!!!

    I love it!!!!

  • Touree on Nov 15, 2008

    Hey Mark. I really did like this. The only thing I would say- be careful with subject verb agreement (just to be safe). I thought it was beautiful, though. Keep writing.

  • casey on Apr 20, 2009

    i loved the story “i love you, i dont know” i love you.
    that story was so heart touching. it makes me love every little thing i get from my boyfriend. he trys and means well. she should have realized it sooner but sometimes in life we dont look at the full picture before we find what we are looking for we just go on to the next and dont even think about what could have been there all along.

  • mark martillan on May 4, 2009

    for Casey

    that’s true.and thank you for your comment i hope you like it, and i just want you to read my incoming article “eyes of a child” it shows simplicity and love through the eyes of a child… thanks

  • nath on Jul 6, 2009

    your article is tight, good expressions

    http://www.relationshipstories.blogspot.com

  • Alexus; age 14 on Sep 26, 2009

    Word choice & vocabulary are the main things you need to work on. I will re-write what would’ve made more sense.
    A guy named ____ had a crush on a girl working in a studio shop. Her name was ____ and she had beautiful golden curls and blue eyes. Everyday ____ would buy a CD at the Studio shop just to see the girl of his dreams. ____ would smile at him and he would get a tingling sensation that would go through his body.( This sentence is kinda random but some how it does fit. You should try to put this in next to how you describe her )-> Everyday she would curl her hair and wait for the guy to make a move because she secretly liked him. It has been two weeks since she last saw him and shes starting to miss him and wonder why he hasn’t came back to the store.
    ~( Okay now you need to mention how she got his adress. It doesn’t make sense that she just goes to his house when she doesn’t even know the guy. Now I will continue without adding how she found his adress.)
    She found out that ____ had brain cancer. She cried all night long( she cried all night long while she was at his house? or after she left his house?If it was after she left his house you should mention that). ____’s mother asked ____ if she would like to see his room. ____ cried when she saw all the unopened CD’s because she kept all of her love letters inside the CD’s (because she also loved the guy – you already mentioned this before. There is no need to bring it up again.). But it was too late…too late for them.( too late to read the love notes?)
    Now i love your stories don’t get me wrong but you do need to work on them.

  • propagandista on Nov 29, 2009

    to ALEXUS

    ok next time i’ll try to work on them…

  • Oly Sandy on Apr 1, 2010

    All the stories is ok and touches the heart the one am commenting most is the story make sense. You know most of the times we girls makes lot of mistake we act before we ask but this is an advice for we girl. I luv the story.

  • Marion on Jun 17, 2010

    The plot of the first one was a great and sad idea but the detail was very poor… im sorry to say you are a great idea maker but you just cant put the words together,and there were a lot of gramaticle errors such as

    “Her mother was raped by shameless hooligan and killed.”

    it could have been

    “Her mother was raped by a shameless hooligan and afterwords the terrible thing that is said to be man killed her”

    i also improved on some sensory detail.

    By the way this was written by a thirteen year old
    critiqued by a thirteen year old. im sorry if i offended you i am just like that i need to point out mistakes and help people understand them it runs in my family.

  • Marion on Jun 17, 2010

    and mark it should be a gradual love not just
    “she loved him”
    And it should not just end at THE END you should take that off and leave them wondering “what will she do next?”

  • priyanka on Nov 22, 2010

    I really like this….thanx 4 shareing…

  • Ularamu Yohanna on Dec 6, 2010

    Tell Me.

  • AASHA on Feb 9, 2011

    it’s really touch my heart.wonderful

  • Xtreem on May 14, 2011

    I dont bother whether how many gramatical mistakes was made in the story. My mind did not go any where till the end. Nice story.

  • Sohail ansari on Jul 17, 2011

    Nice story

  • sila on Aug 23, 2011

    yeah it was really heart touching and short love story

  • sheetal on Sep 22, 2011

    where is the full story of doll house?

  • rajat on Oct 9, 2011

    nice :)

  • elliot on Nov 28, 2011

    Nice nd touchin God plz I dnt wish to b n dis shoe

  • suzzy on Nov 28, 2011

    Nice nd touchin God plz I dnt wish to b n dis shoe

  • sana gomez on Jan 24, 2012

    nt bad at all bt gramatical errors shoud be prevented for bettrment

  • dillu on Feb 19, 2012

    nice n touchin

  • Dan on Feb 20, 2012

    excellent dude i liked it by heart………

  • amalina on May 30, 2012

    :) guzel

  • CASSY-BLOND on Jun 21, 2012

    I AM CRYing ALREADY…….

  • leolucifer on Jul 20, 2012

    awsme story…… i realy like this story ….. keep it up. u have a great tallent to write such kinds of story…

  • wench bersuela on Aug 7, 2012

    very touching!!!!!!!

  • jan lenard on Oct 5, 2012

    there was a girl who loves his best friend than her boyfriend one day there the girl wake that his best friend is dead and she saw his boyfriend have a knife the girl call a cop the cop arrest the his boyfriend then one day the his boyfriend was executed one year later the friend of the girl call her the friend say “one night you best friend try to rape and kill you your lucky because your boyfriend come and save you

  • sunny , preet on Oct 16, 2012

    very nice

  • sunny , preet on Oct 16, 2012

    very nice

  • little lantern on Dec 19, 2012

    … love this site..
    …you make me SMILE..

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