I enjoyed the read. Erotic, but tastefully done. Well written. Very economical.

Whew. I think I’ll take a nice long walk in the cool rain after this one.

I really enjoyed reading this, it was excellent! You should continue to do more writings like this, you are very good!

Excellent!! Well done! ..This was very interesting stories..well presented and very attractive piece..I loved it. Thanks for sharing this cool stuff..Cheers

Very well presented ..Great work

I think I’ll take a walk in the cool rain with Moose. *wink*

That was a fantastic story, I loved the way you presented it and drew us all in! lovely ending too, even if she did have to wait five years for it! x well done honey xxx

Surprising ending!

I liked your story but where was the ending? I wanted resolution.

Dear Ruby Hawk, I had to leave a little to the imagination *wink*.

That’s a surprise! ^_^

wow powerful keep them coming

Awesome I like it whole lot
Lee Ness

Hmm..not sure I’d be so forgiving..hehehehahaha..but it’s not my story now is it? Very steamy Marie Milton

Hahah…. Oh yes I remember this story! It’s still as good and you did give an ending. He was told about his son! 5 year late admittedly but he was told. Who cares if they stayed together or not!