This is an example of writing, flash fiction, love and passion.

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The young man and woman had been married one year.  This day was their anniversary.  They had just finished a romantic candle light dinner at home and now sat on the sofa to exchange gifts.  The golden rays of the sun coming through the picture window filled the living room with a soft golden haze.

“Black stockings,” the young wife said.

“Don’t you like them?”

“Honey, you gave me black stockings on our honeymoon and for my birthday.”

“I know.”

“They were just like these.  Black stockings with elastic tops.”  She was looking down at the black stockings in the tissue-thin white wrapping paper in the white box.  She looked up at her husband.  “But I don’t wear stockings.  And I only have two pairs of pantyhose.”

“You have another gift.”

“Max, don’t tell me you’ve developed a fetish.”

“Of course not.”  He laughed uneasily.

“I never knew you had a fetish.”

“I don’t have a fetish.”

That night in their bedroom they made love.  He was nude on his back and she was on her knees nude straddled over his lap, the palms of her hands on the bed on either side of his head.  She wore the black stockings, his hands on the elastic tops.  They had been making love in this position for some time.  Moonlight streamed through the window pane.  The young wife trembled with excitement.  She leaned down to kiss her husband and to say in a voice thick with passion, “If it’s going to be like this I’ll wear black stockings any time.”

Girls Gone Wild

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  • Deep Blue on Aug 1, 2009

    Black stockings certainly works.

  • takafofo on Jun 7, 2010

    Hi! My name is takafofo.
    I have read your story and I really liked it.
    I found your story very interesting because it is only about a single scene.
    I liked your story because, it is about a scene that could occur in real life. I was able to imagine the scene because you explained the scene with good details. For example,” Black stockings with elastic tops” and,”They had just finished a romantic candle light dinner at home and now sat on the sofa to exchange gifts.”
    I liked there two lines.

    I have also written a story which has only a couple of scenes, just like yours.

    If you would like to read my story,please come to

    Thank you, and… nice story!

  • coffeeadict on Jan 2, 2011

    That’s hot, man!

  • Roe2115 on Mar 22, 2011

    I agree. This is hot.

  • quiet voice on May 19, 2011

    ….Very vivid. Great writing.

  • kingdude on Jun 30, 2011

    Would have been better if you had turned things totally on it’s head and had the bloke wear them for her

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