Comments on: Flash Fiction: Black Stockings

By: kingdude

kingdude — Thu, 30 Jun 2011 12:51:20 +0000

Would have been better if you had turned things totally on it’s head and had the bloke wear them for her

By: quiet voice

quiet voice — Thu, 19 May 2011 18:04:40 +0000

….Very vivid. Great writing.

By: RoeHill

RoeHill — Wed, 23 Mar 2011 00:30:45 +0000

I agree. This is hot.

By: coffeeadict

coffeeadict — Sun, 02 Jan 2011 17:34:38 +0000

That’s hot, man!

By: takafofo

takafofo — Tue, 08 Jun 2010 01:54:07 +0000

Hi! My name is takafofo.
I have read your story and I really liked it.
I found your story very interesting because it is only about a single scene.
I liked your story because, it is about a scene that could occur in real life. I was able to imagine the scene because you explained the scene with good details. For example,” Black stockings with elastic tops” and,”They had just finished a romantic candle light dinner at home and now sat on the sofa to exchange gifts.”
I liked there two lines.

I have also written a story which has only a couple of scenes, just like yours.

If you would like to read my story,please come to

http://dihs2010.wordpress.com/2010/06/01/my-life%c2%a0changed/

Thank you, and… nice story!

By: Deep Blue

Deep Blue — Sat, 01 Aug 2009 22:12:18 +0000

Black stockings certainly works.