It was Thursday. Saturday was New Year’s Day. The weather report said cloudy until Monday.

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He just had to get out of the apartment and away from writing for a while.  But where do you go with no money?  His pension check was late.

He found enough pennies in the penny jar to make a little over three dollars.  Three dollars was enough for a cheap forty-ounce bottle of beer.  The first time he goes to the new bank on the corner, and it’s to exchange six rolls of pennies so he can get a forty of Pabst.  How humiliating.  The overcast day fit his mood.

On the way back to his apartment, with the forty cradled in his right arm and his mind back on the writing, a woman said his name.

“Jen,” he said.  “How are you?”

“Fine.”  She laughed, actually pleased to see him.  She pointed at the crest on his hoodie and laughed again.  “Del’s.  I just love it.”

He thought quickly.  “Marianne gave it to me for…service beyond the call of duty.”

They both got a good laugh out of that one.  It was an inside joke.

She said, “I can’t wait to read the book.  I’m ordering my copy this weekend.”

When he got back in his apartment, before taking off his hoodie and cap, he cracked open the forty and had a long drink to celebrate.

The End

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  • Val Mills on Dec 30, 2010

    Nice little story, with subtle meanings hinted at. Like it.

  • Jenny Heart on Dec 30, 2010

    Liked it! More!

  • JoeStone on Dec 30, 2010

    Nice post, good job!

  • bigpapadan on Dec 30, 2010

    Well done there, sir. I love the humility and the truth involved here. Thanks.

  • CA Johnson on Dec 30, 2010

    I really liked this story. Thanks for sharing.

  • Snooky on Dec 30, 2010

    quite & quiet and begging for continuation

  • johnnydod on Dec 30, 2010

    Loved this you have me hooked

  • BruceW on Dec 30, 2010

    I guess I’d understand it better if I knew what the heck a forty was!

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 31, 2010

    I loved the story. It is true you can write a story about anything. What is a forty, by the way?

    Christine

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Dec 31, 2010

    Cute.

  • Guy Hogan on Dec 31, 2010

    A “forty” refers to a 40 oz. bottle of beer. I added three words to the story that should clarify this. Thanks, everybody.

  • Beecansee25 on Jan 7, 2011

    nice story , like it..

  • roehill on May 20, 2011

    Well done.

  • Marc Chism on Jun 14, 2011

    And the point is: GET IT OUT! …got it!!!

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