Flash Fiction: Dangerous Sex

Guy Hogan on Nov 19, 2010

Tags: flash fiction, husband, Men, panties, sex, wife, women

They were respectable people.

It was a formal dinner, dance. The men wore tuxedos and the women wore gowns. This husband and wife said their goodbyes to the host and hostess and all around. At home the babysitter waited.

Upstairs, the two walked hand in hand down the long hall of plush, red carpet and overhead chandeliers to retrieve his coat and her wrap. Downstairs, the orchestra played a waltz.

Suddenly, the wife pulled her husband through a door he had not noticed. She clicked on the light and snapped to the lock. The husband looked around.

“A powder room,” he said.

She said, “I’m not wearing any panties.”

The End

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BluSphere on Nov 19, 2010
Good write friend.
By the way. Why does everyone write about sex these days???

Best regards,
BluSphere
Bruce Officer on Nov 19, 2010
Stops at just the right place. Super!
Thomas Hodge on Nov 19, 2010
outstanding.
Guy Hogan on Nov 19, 2010
BlueShere, everything goes in a cycle.
lillyrose on Nov 19, 2010
Masterpiece Guy! I think you only put that title on because people are complaining about the amount of sex titles and writing that is appearing on triond! Sex is part of life, nobody is forcing anyone to read anything, it is a choice.
suhail on Nov 19, 2010
i don’t think your writing works because of the topic you select it ONLY because of the way you write ! ..

Ever tried writing dark/horror in similar way …
webseowriters on Nov 19, 2010
Thanks for sharing
yes me on Nov 19, 2010
Nice one this Guy cheers
Jimmy Shilaho on Nov 19, 2010
A nice piece.
Emmie on Nov 19, 2010
I don’t get what people are complaining about. Sex is sex, it happens, build a bridge and get over it.
I actually loved it, you write it so well and then leave it on a cliff hanger and that is what’s great about it.

Thumbs up from me!
Guy Hogan on Nov 19, 2010
suhail, I have no interest in horror. Erotica has a long and respected literary tradition that goes back thousands of years.
PSingh1990 on Nov 19, 2010
Nice One.

Thanks for share.
albert1jemi on Nov 19, 2010
wow great
PR Mace on Nov 20, 2010
Close to my fantasy, I would have mine in an elevator.
Analyst on Nov 20, 2010
That was exciting indeed! Thanks for the share!
bigpapadan on Nov 20, 2010
Wow! When I first checked on this I was interested in Flash Fiction as a genre; you have definately made an art form of it… very wonderful, the way you draw the reader in… huge thumbs up.
PR Mace on Jan 11, 2011
Okay, I have already read this one but it was worth a second read. I don’t wear them either when I dance only hose. I know too much information. I am a nasty girl sometimes.
Val Mills on Jan 11, 2011
I obviously missed this first time round – thanks for providing a link back to it. Clever.
shakugan123 on Jan 11, 2011
this kind of genre never get out of date.
Roe2115 on May 20, 2011
Awesome post. Love the naughty ending.

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