He was so nervous. He really liked her. He just didn’t want to mess up.

This flash fiction story takes place several years ago.  He and she sat on the narrow bed in his dimly lit dormitory room.  He had smuggled in two six-packs of beer and now he sat beside her as they listened to his stereo.  Elton John sang “Tiny Dancer.”  It was night and the lights of the city of Pittsburgh seemed like a post card through the open window.  It was a summer night.

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“I really like this song,” she said.

She sat looking down at her hands which held a can of beer.

He nodded, took a deep breath and forced himself to do what he had wanted to do since he first saw her in his political science class last semester.  Holding his can of beer in his left hand, he reached and slid his right hand inside her blouse and inside her bra.

She looked up at him.  He waited.  Elton kept singing.

She said, “Your hand’s cold.”

He began to pull his hand out.

“No,” she said.  “That’s okay.”

He kept his hand inside her bra.

She put a hand on her blouse to keep his hand where it was at.  She said, “I’ll warm it up.”

The End

Taboo Love is a flash fiction story.

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  • LoveDoctor on Nov 14, 2010

    Super!

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 14, 2010

    A great one, Guy.

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Nov 14, 2010

    Hmmmmmh

  • Purnomosidhi on Nov 15, 2010

    Funny!

  • Carolyn Cordon on Nov 15, 2010

    You are naughty Guy, but in the nicest possible way!

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Nov 15, 2010

    I like how you let our minds work to create the scene.

  • papaleng on Nov 15, 2010

    great creativity.

  • Lady Sunshine on Nov 15, 2010

    LOL. “Your hand’s cold.” You allow the reader to use their imagination…or was that because of the flash fiction format? Or both?

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 15, 2010

    You left so much to the imagination. A wonderful piece.

    Christine

  • yes me on Nov 15, 2010

    Ah… them were the day’s Guy cheers

  • yes me on Nov 15, 2010

    Ah… them were the day\’s Guy cheers

  • yes me on Nov 15, 2010

    Ah… them were the day\\\’s Guy cheers

  • Emmie on Nov 15, 2010

    Loved it!

    Also well done on making the Hot Content list.

  • Souldose on Nov 15, 2010

    Uuuummmmm, interesting

  • Glass Half Full Gal on Nov 15, 2010

    “I’ll warm it up.” *giggle*

  • albert1jemi on Nov 15, 2010

    wow that was interesting LOL

  • Roe2115 on Nov 15, 2010

    I want a sequel to this story. Great post.

  • rivet32 on Nov 16, 2010

    You use a lot of great description in your writing; she kinda has a naughty flair to her. i can see how things can quickly get heated up!!!

  • Raj the Tora on Nov 17, 2010

    great write Guy. Keep it coming. :)

  • Nikolaos Skordilis on Jan 13, 2011

    I loved it.Compressed and compact story, indeed!

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