They were just friends.

It was a mutual flirtation.  So when he suggested she come to his dormitory room that evening for a few beers and a back rub, she accepted.  They ended up nude on the bed.  He sat beside her on the bed as she lay face down and he slowly worked a little baby oil into the muscles of her back.  This went on for some time.  Then he did her buttocks, upper and lower legs and even her feet.  She lay quietly with her eyes closed.

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“Now turn over,” he said.

Both of them knew what was going on.  The radio was tuned to the campus station which was broadcasting the school basketball game.  It was a home game.  The team was winning.  The two announcers gave a running commentary of the game.  The noise of the crowd and the chanting of the cheerleaders could be heard clearly behind the commentary.

The young woman turned over on her back to face her friend.  The young man reached to the side table for the small bottle of baby oil.  He put a little oil on one palm, put the bottle back, rubbed his palms together and began to move his hands over her body.  She watched his face.  He watched his hands.  When he put a hand between her legs she brought her legs together tight, trapping his hand so that it could not move.  He looked from his hand to her face.

She said, “Is this part of the massage?”

“Sure.”

“I mean, this is really personal.  I shouldn’t even be here like this.  I shouldn’t even be here naked.”

“Be my girlfriend.”

“Be your girlfriend,” she said.  “Maybe I already have a boyfriend.”

“Do you?”

“Who wants to know?” she said.  “Do you want to be my boyfriend?”

“Sure.”

The crowd cheered.  A time out was called.

“Okay,” she said.  “You’re my boyfriend.”

She unlocked her legs.  He watched her face.

The End

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  • LoveDoctor on Nov 15, 2010

    Contains scenes of a sexual nature. Intended for mature audiences only. Good story. I thought vaseline instead of baby oil. My vivid imagination.

  • MichaelBlack on Nov 15, 2010

    Nice. – Michael

  • Suni51 on Nov 15, 2010

    Was that the end? No i don’t think, come on, be honest. I wanted to read it till the end, the real end.

  • yes me on Nov 15, 2010

    Maybe the end of innocence? liked it cheers Guy

  • Guy Hogan on Nov 15, 2010

    Suni51, anyone who reads the story knows how it ends. The “real ending” is left to the imagination of the reader. It is this involment of the reader in the creative process that gives the story its literary value.

  • webseowriters on Nov 15, 2010

    interesting

  • viciouspsyche on Nov 15, 2010

    interesting…but i think that should not be the end of it….but yeah…well i could possibly imagine of many things..lol…nice one hogan…!!

  • Roe2115 on Nov 15, 2010

    I want more.

  • albert1jemi on Nov 15, 2010

    ha h great ending

  • pattiann on Nov 15, 2010

    Good story!

  • Mr.Reggie on Nov 15, 2010

    Excellent Write Guy

  • Tulan on Nov 15, 2010

    A good one.

  • lpshady on Nov 15, 2010

    This is great! excellent

  • PR Mace on Nov 16, 2010

    What is a little baby oil between friends? Well it is whatever you imagine it to be. Excellent read.

  • Snooky on Nov 16, 2010

    I was enyious of that massage till he got to the leg part
    Nice teaser

  • Lord Banks on Nov 16, 2010

    Classic work as usual well done LB

  • Lady Sunshine on Nov 16, 2010

    Can a guy and girl just be friends?

  • thomasking on Nov 16, 2010

    Nice story, does he like her face or what?

  • Guy Hogan on Nov 16, 2010

    Lady Sunshine, of course a guy and girl can be just friends. But if my characters stayed just friends I wouldn’t have a story. Something had to happen. Something had to change. Their relationship changed. But I know what you mean. If there was not going to be a change in their relationship I would have had them keep their clothes on. She would not have accepted an invitation for a back rub in the first place.

  • Guy Hogan on Nov 16, 2010

    Lady Sunshine, of course a guy and girl can be just friends. But if my characters stayed just friends I would not have a story. Something had to happen. Something had to change. Their relationship changed. But I know what you mean. If there was not going to be a change in their relationship I would have had them keep their clothes on. She would not have accepted an invitation for a back rub in the first place.

  • Guy Hogan on Nov 16, 2010

    thomasking, he likes her. Period.

  • UNMESH on Nov 16, 2010

    nice dear its very interesting…..

  • xyz999 on Nov 16, 2010

    Nice story. When will I get to read the next chapter?

  • Raj the Tora on Nov 17, 2010

    This post is so relaxing as a real massage would be :)

  • sandhee on Jan 13, 2011

    nice story I will wait next chapter og this one..good job

  • PR Mace on Jan 16, 2011

    Stopped by for another view.

  • V rank on Jan 23, 2011

    hot and funny…

  • V rank on Apr 20, 2011

    Ah… so this is a form of niche blog… I guess I can really try this…

  • chennysan on May 9, 2011

    too implicit! leave something for the imagination, next time around! anyway, good try. Should have had an adults only sort of intimation!

  • R K Vajpeyi on May 23, 2011

    Cool and very well built

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