She was hot.

She said, What’s your name?

Harry.

Harry, do you have a last name?

I’m not going to tell you my last name.  What are you doing?  What are you wearing?

I’m relaxing on the sofa, Harry, in a sheer, black long nightie.

I like that.

What else do you like, Harry?

Oh, you know.  The usual.

Anal?  Oral?  Around the world?  A little golden shower?

No golden shower.  Can I see you?

You know where to find me, Harry.

I’ll be right there.

In a moment a man entered the living room and sat down beside the woman.  He wore a bathrobe. The couple were middle age.  He sat down beside her and they put their arms around each other and kissed.

After the kiss he leaned back and said, You’re the best wife a man ever had.

The End

Here’s a flash fiction story you may like: Nude Massage.

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  • Inzimam on Jun 8, 2011

    i liked it,thanks for post…

  • ceegirl on Jun 8, 2011

    Great post.

  • Pooja Says on Jun 8, 2011

    Great story..really enjoyed it.

  • Jenny Heart on Jun 8, 2011

    You speak it like it is Guy.

  • mphsglo on Jun 8, 2011

    Nice!!! Totally unexpected. LOL @ ‘I’m not going to tell you my last name.’

  • LoveDoctor on Jun 8, 2011

    You’re an expert at writing flash fiction. Why middle-aged? ahhhh. lol.

  • Payge on Jun 8, 2011

    Didnt expect the ending but was a very cool post to read.

  • Atanacio on Jun 8, 2011

    so this is flash fiction hmmm

  • jrabraham on Jun 8, 2011

    haha!nice twist! :)

  • Lord Banks on Jun 9, 2011

    Its is very difficult to keep long term relationships sexually interesting good different short story liked it Guy. LB

  • PR Mace on Jun 12, 2011

    Good one, Guy. My husband and I use to have a lot of phone sex when he was in the Navy and deployed.

  • Roe2115 on Jun 15, 2011

    Great story, love the ending.

  • Melanie T on Jun 16, 2011

    Cute! Not at all what I was expecting!!

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