Flooding story.

FLOODING CREEK

One day some people went to their farm. Their names were Trish, Neville, Claire, Sally and Molly. Molly is a dog. When they arrived there was a big flood because it rained a lot. There was a strong current.

They were walking along the creek. Neville stood right in front of the creek. Molly went in the creek because Neville was standing there. Molly was struggling to swim against the current. She was getting pulled under a log. Neville jumped in to save her. Claire was yelling and Sally was screaming and yelping. You could hear the current smashing and slamming against the log. Molly was almost fully under the log. Then Neville grabbed hold of her. He dragged her out. Claire was crying and Sally was puffing and panting from screaming.

Molly was soaking. Molly remembered not to go in the creek even if Neville was nearby.

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  • sandie on Oct 4, 2009

    it does happen in real life, thats why when my dog goes for a paddle i have a long lead on her to pull her out, story is good.

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