A sensual short story of passion and the inenvitability of War.

  Friday night until Sunday morning!

The sun just nudged its nose under the heavy blackout curtains, God how he had missed the smell of her hair! He had no idea how women can get their hair to smell of roses and look so perfect even lying in bed. His hand ever so gently rested at the small of her back just before the rise of her ivory coloured hips. Gently he pulled the covers back as to not waken her. His eyes were greedy for the sight of his wife it had been 18months since he had seen the wonder of her body.

She faced away from him but even the sight of her shapely legs was enough to physically arouse him. He thought,

“Dare I wake her? I wore her out so last night and Friday night, its just I love her so and, being in the Army for 2 years has made me crazy for her. Other married guys strayed with prostitutes, but not me I waited”

He slid ever closer to his beautiful wife and he began with the slightest of touches to float his hand over her back and inch his hand around her waist and ease his hand upwards. He felt her breathing increase and he was not sure if she liked what he was doing in her sleep or she was awake?

Temptation got the better of him and his hand went along the rise of her silky smooth  breast then,

“Tom not now baby my mother is just in the next bedroom, she will hear the bed springs!”

Tom replied,

“Please its just been so long I err just want to that’s all”

“No baby that’s final I wont go down to breakfast knowing she has heard us”

She continued,

“Anyway aren’t you sore after Friday night then even more on Saturday? Your like a clockwork wind up toy that never stops! Don’t get me wrong I want you too, maybe she will go down the shops and get a Sunday paper. Be patient Tom we have the rest of our lives now you have been discharged from the Infantry”

As a way of a compromise Lucy rolled over onto to Tom and grabbed his manhood and said,

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  • ishinimrod on Nov 19, 2010

    I enjoy reading this. This is nice.
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  • Darla Cooke on Nov 19, 2010

    Wow! A great story with a very surprising ending.

  • shakugan123 on Nov 19, 2010

    so sad :( I wish for a happy ending.

  • mo hoyal on Nov 19, 2010

    What a story and tastefully done where the husband and wife do their thing, but such a shocking ending. One thing to be sure, I am sick of what some Triond writers are now doing to get hits, glad you’re not one of them!
    Best regards friend!

  • albert1jemi on Nov 19, 2010

    well written

  • Mr.Reggie on Nov 19, 2010

    Excellent Write!

  • PR Mace on Nov 20, 2010

    Now, LB, that was a well written story and I never saw the ending coming. Well, well done.

  • Sceptical Thinker on Nov 20, 2010

    Great read LB, such a sad ending but I suppose thats one of the realities of wartime.

  • Guy Hogan on Nov 20, 2010

    This is a good story. There are things you could do to improve it. It could be a much better story. It would be a great story to workshop somewhere. The dialogue has some issues that could be worked out in workshop. Some of the dialogue reads more like exposition than dialogue. Things like that.

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