The quest is on.

THE MEETING

My heart was still pounding remembering the cruel death of my father. All I saw just seemed real. It was not just a mere dream. I was there and I saw Englum kill my father. I sat up with George still looking at me. I looked at him straight in the eyes and said. “Let’s get Englum.”

Surprised by what he just said, Cedrick’s eyes widened. “Wow!” He said briefly while staring at me like I was some sort of a weird person. Few seconds later, he started to babble. “Are you high? A long sleep and suddenly you wake up brave enough. That’s cool. Yesterday, you wouldn’t even believe me and you even had a lot of questions and theories. That’s odd huh!” Cedrick blabbered. He talked fast that I couldn’t even catch up with some of the words he said.

“Cedrick… The staff teleported my spirit back to the past.” I said.

Cedrick jerked a bit. He must’ve been surprised that he just stared at me for a minute.

I sighed. “I’m serious. Don’t you believe me? You’re the one who said Trandoz is a world of science and magic. And yes, my spirit traveled back to the past.”

Cedrick tilted his head sideways before he responded. “Yeah. That is true. Physical bodies can teleport but spirits…” he paused. “That’s…”

I didn’t give him a chance to continue. “Also real. Just like what you did to my father’s soul. You extracted his soul and teleported him back to the mortal world. That’s what you did, right?”

He was astounded for a moment and then he nodded. “Well, yeah, it was even my first time to do it. Never thought I could but I did.”

“I saw everything!” I told him. “I knew everything!”

“That’s great George. That way, you won’t have to ask me of questions and you won’t have to tell me theories.

You’re a sage so you ought to know everything. That’s really great George! That’s just great!” Cedrick blabbered again and that irritated me.

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  • nobert soloria bermosa on May 26, 2011

    wonderful share…a fascinating and wonderful encounter

  • lapasan on May 26, 2011

    Another good story of a nice series. I like it.

  • No Share on May 26, 2011

    freaking elfin yeahhh.. lol. just to borrow some of your line here. galing.. i dunno how you keep track of your characters

  • papaleng on May 27, 2011

    Ayos. nasiyahan akong basahin ito, hinahanap ko si Orlando Bloom.. elf ba siya? LOL

  • Dee Gold on May 30, 2011

    I’m on the edge of my seat

  • pruelpo on Jun 2, 2011

    Friend I just finished reading pages 1, 2 and 3 but I promise I would proceed to the next pages…I felt like I was the one telling the story. You wrote it in first person view point and it is very effective.

  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 2, 2011

    An interesting story,

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Jun 4, 2011

    I like the story but the dialogue has too much slang-it throws you out of the setting.

  • isloooboy on Jun 6, 2011

    Very good and interesting story

  • Alyssa M. on Jun 6, 2011

    liked it. good job!

  • obikelvin on Jun 23, 2011

    Awesome post. Glad i came across this.I really enjoyed it.Thanks for the share!

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