Comments on: Girls Gone Wild

By: Love Doctor

Love Doctor — Wed, 21 Dec 2011 06:01:58 +0000

I really like the ending. Good work. I’m here now reviewing the guidelines and reading some of the stories.

By: deedaG50

deedaG50 — Wed, 08 Jun 2011 00:13:43 +0000

Surprise ending. Love it.

By: sloanie

sloanie — Mon, 25 Apr 2011 00:15:40 +0000

There were three in the bed and the football player said,
Who’s giving h_ _ d. Just running with the story Guy!

By: quiet voice

quiet voice — Mon, 25 Apr 2011 00:03:14 +0000

….Truly funny, unexpected ending. Good work.

By: Jduval at DarkGrin.com

Jduval at DarkGrin.com — Sun, 24 Apr 2011 22:44:38 +0000

Like the twist!

By: Aiyanna

Aiyanna — Sun, 24 Apr 2011 22:32:03 +0000

Well, had uni classmates tell me this and it was a different kind of an experience listening to them argue about who they wanted to sleep with and could never find any other place but the dining room to discuss this… Think its the day and age to find out about the apples and pineapples and how they taste before trying it out for themselves…. Good one!!!

By: Cyni1106

Cyni1106 — Sun, 24 Apr 2011 16:09:55 +0000

Cool, The surprise ending puts an instant smile on your face. What a twist, but tipicle of today’s attitude. You nailed it brilliantly. Great piece.

By: Franklin

Franklin — Sun, 23 Jan 2011 11:59:46 +0000

very simple yet very effective to give me a smile… the ending is genius!

By: tiffi

tiffi — Fri, 21 Jan 2011 15:18:04 +0000

Nice story! I came here from the character developing page btw this is really funny!!

By: Val Mills

Val Mills — Tue, 11 Jan 2011 23:50:01 +0000

Great ending!