Comments on: Girls Kissing Girls http://authspot.com/short-stories/girls-kissing-girls/ Sun, 22 Nov 2009 07:09:10 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: Guy Hogan http://authspot.com/short-stories/girls-kissing-girls/comment-page-1/#comment-880837 Guy Hogan Sun, 16 Aug 2009 14:38:52 +0000 http://authspot.com/short-stories/girls-kissing-girls/#comment-880837 oldster, balance and flow are very important for a story this short. There's description, confict and leaving some blanks so that the reader can participate in the creative process. Then the writer has to let go and trust the reader. www.writinghood.com/literature/flash-fiction-as-poetry/ oldster, balance and flow are very important for a story this short. There’s description, confict and leaving some blanks so that the reader can participate in the creative process. Then the writer has to let go and trust the reader.

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]]> By: oldster http://authspot.com/short-stories/girls-kissing-girls/comment-page-1/#comment-880285 oldster Sat, 15 Aug 2009 22:45:11 +0000 http://authspot.com/short-stories/girls-kissing-girls/#comment-880285 A fountain of knowledge Guy. Good read. A fountain of knowledge Guy. Good read.

]]> By: Guy Hogan http://authspot.com/short-stories/girls-kissing-girls/comment-page-1/#comment-878283 Guy Hogan Fri, 14 Aug 2009 14:23:27 +0000 http://authspot.com/short-stories/girls-kissing-girls/#comment-878283 Randy, the California Supreme Court decision on same-sex marriage really was the seed for the story. I made everything else up. The Hillman Library is real. www.writinghood.com/writing/short-story-ideas-that-work/ Randy, the California Supreme Court decision on same-sex marriage really was the seed for the story. I made everything else up. The Hillman Library is real.

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]]> By: R.B. Parsley http://authspot.com/short-stories/girls-kissing-girls/comment-page-1/#comment-878007 R.B. Parsley Fri, 14 Aug 2009 06:06:57 +0000 http://authspot.com/short-stories/girls-kissing-girls/#comment-878007 Guy, Another great story. You know how to hold the readers attention. Excellent work!!! Randy Guy,
Another great story. You know how to hold the readers attention.
Excellent work!!!

Randy

]]> By: Uma Shankari http://authspot.com/short-stories/girls-kissing-girls/comment-page-1/#comment-801023 Uma Shankari Fri, 29 May 2009 04:32:01 +0000 http://authspot.com/short-stories/girls-kissing-girls/#comment-801023 Good flow. Good flow.

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