Comments on: Girls Kissing Girls http://authspot.com/short-stories/girls-kissing-girls/ Thu, 16 Feb 2012 23:39:38 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: bigpapadan http://authspot.com/short-stories/girls-kissing-girls/comment-page-1/#comment-1559114 bigpapadan Mon, 17 Jan 2011 14:07:01 +0000 http://authspot.com/short-stories/girls-kissing-girls/#comment-1559114 Great story! The interaction and the hesitancy is so wonderfully done, you feel almost as if you are in the car with them. Great story! The interaction and the hesitancy is so wonderfully done, you feel almost as if you are in the car with them.

]]> By: coffeeadict http://authspot.com/short-stories/girls-kissing-girls/comment-page-1/#comment-1460573 coffeeadict Wed, 03 Nov 2010 18:37:29 +0000 http://authspot.com/short-stories/girls-kissing-girls/#comment-1460573 Well written. Keeping it short and crisp isn't easy, but you've nailed it! Well written. Keeping it short and crisp isn’t easy, but you’ve nailed it!

]]> By: jamesII http://authspot.com/short-stories/girls-kissing-girls/comment-page-1/#comment-1366100 jamesII Wed, 25 Aug 2010 09:38:19 +0000 http://authspot.com/short-stories/girls-kissing-girls/#comment-1366100 Good story! Touchy subject matter! You handled it quite well! I imagine it is a matter values--and we know they differs from family to family and from person to person. Remember, though, humans are binded to certain universal laws--for every action there is an equal opposite reaction--certainly some kind of dynamics will derive from the action--and we reap what we sow! I am not one to know what can or might happen! I am one to know that something will happen! What that something is? I do not know! I will end by saying--people have their practices-- right or wrong, restraintful or sinful, divine or evil--they are mostly going to do what they desire to do! Cool! Good story! Touchy subject matter! You handled it quite well! I imagine it is a matter values–and we know they differs from family to family and from person to person. Remember, though, humans are binded to certain universal laws–for every action there is an equal opposite reaction–certainly some kind of dynamics will derive from the action–and we reap what we sow!
I am not one to know what can or might happen! I am one to know that something will happen! What that something is? I do not know! I will end by saying–people have their practices–
right or wrong, restraintful or sinful, divine or evil–they are mostly going to do what they desire to do! Cool!

]]> By: Guy Hogan http://authspot.com/short-stories/girls-kissing-girls/comment-page-1/#comment-880837 Guy Hogan Sun, 16 Aug 2009 14:38:52 +0000 http://authspot.com/short-stories/girls-kissing-girls/#comment-880837 oldster, balance and flow are very important for a story this short. There's description, confict and leaving some blanks so that the reader can participate in the creative process. Then the writer has to let go and trust the reader. www.writinghood.com/literature/flash-fiction-as-poetry/ oldster, balance and flow are very important for a story this short. There’s description, confict and leaving some blanks so that the reader can participate in the creative process. Then the writer has to let go and trust the reader.

http://www.writinghood.com/literature/flash-fiction-as-poetry/

]]> By: oldster http://authspot.com/short-stories/girls-kissing-girls/comment-page-1/#comment-880285 oldster Sat, 15 Aug 2009 22:45:11 +0000 http://authspot.com/short-stories/girls-kissing-girls/#comment-880285 A fountain of knowledge Guy. Good read. A fountain of knowledge Guy. Good read.

]]> By: Guy Hogan http://authspot.com/short-stories/girls-kissing-girls/comment-page-1/#comment-878283 Guy Hogan Fri, 14 Aug 2009 14:23:27 +0000 http://authspot.com/short-stories/girls-kissing-girls/#comment-878283 Randy, the California Supreme Court decision on same-sex marriage really was the seed for the story. I made everything else up. The Hillman Library is real. www.writinghood.com/writing/short-story-ideas-that-work/ Randy, the California Supreme Court decision on same-sex marriage really was the seed for the story. I made everything else up. The Hillman Library is real.

http://www.writinghood.com/writing/short-story-ideas-that-work/

]]> By: R.B. Parsley http://authspot.com/short-stories/girls-kissing-girls/comment-page-1/#comment-878007 R.B. Parsley Fri, 14 Aug 2009 06:06:57 +0000 http://authspot.com/short-stories/girls-kissing-girls/#comment-878007 Guy, Another great story. You know how to hold the readers attention. Excellent work!!! Randy Guy,
Another great story. You know how to hold the readers attention.
Excellent work!!!

Randy

]]> By: Uma Shankari http://authspot.com/short-stories/girls-kissing-girls/comment-page-1/#comment-801023 Uma Shankari Fri, 29 May 2009 04:32:01 +0000 http://authspot.com/short-stories/girls-kissing-girls/#comment-801023 Good flow. Good flow.

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