A short Story.

I shook my head, blinked a coupled of times and told me to pull myself together, as I drove off, the rain seemed to be a little less severe, after a few more minuets driving, there she was again standing on the side of the road, I stopped and invited her in,

“Fancy seeing you again” I said sarcastically, lee smiled.

“Sorry about that” she said “I guess I owe you some sort of an explanation? You might not believe this but please listen”

“I’m all ears Lee”

She gave a puzzled look and said “Your ears are nice”

“No no” I said “It’s just a saying”

“Oh” she gave a cute giggle and continued her story

“Well I am not from this planet I live on Phobos the first moon of Mars, and I made the mistake of falling in love, this is forbidden on my world, so when the mood police found out I was arrested.

“Can I ask a question please” I interrupted, “What the hell are the mood police?”.

“It’s a force with the power to read your mind” Lee explained “They constantly serf the minds of the people to see if anyone is breaking the law, well anyway to get back to my story.

As I say I was arrested and the ship you saw was the ship taken me to the prison moon of Io, It’s a moon of Jupiter”

“Yes I know” I said “I took Astronomy as a subject at university”

“Well, the ship needed to take on water and this is why we stopped on Earth, but I managed to escape and that’s when you saw me in the road”

“Well I will take you to my place, you should be safe there” she squeezed my hand and smiled, “Thank you, you just don’t know how grateful I am.

“Your more than welcome sweet” I said and drove on.

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  • krrymarie on Mar 6, 2010

    Is there going to be any more to this story? I am hooked lol!!

  • jennifer eiffel01 on Mar 6, 2010

    This is a REALLY good short story! I look forward to reading more writing from you!

  • ujwal28 on Mar 6, 2010

    Interesting story

  • diamondpoet on Mar 6, 2010

    Don’t you fall in love with this alien woman or the mood police will be looking for you. lol I love the pic it goes well with the post and you have managed to capture my attention, Good piece.

  • Moira62 on Mar 6, 2010

    Hurry up with part four Johnny we’re all hooked…i see a sci-fi blockbuster un-veiling here..Watch out Speilberg….:)

  • Christine Ramsay on Mar 6, 2010

    Interesting developments, Johnny. You’ve got me hooked now.


  • jasminehyin on Mar 6, 2010

    well done

  • Roberta on Mar 6, 2010

    Ha ha ha ha ha aaaaaaaa. This is getting really exciting, sounds serious to me, has she got pointed ears? you better watch it, your kids might have pointed ears as well, roll on the next chapter

  • papaleng on Mar 6, 2010

    the plot is getting more interesting.

  • devsir on Mar 6, 2010

    interesting one

  • phyllis on Mar 6, 2010

    well done ; building tension

  • landiro on Mar 6, 2010

    waiting for more !!

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Mar 6, 2010

    A good short story.

  • Jamie Myles on Mar 6, 2010

    Intruiging! Will you be continuing?

  • standingproud on Mar 6, 2010

    LOL, I just commented on Chapter 3, and I was the only one there… so odd, I was thinking this was chapter 4,lol…
    Oh you have nice ears.

  • Shirley Shuler on Mar 7, 2010

    LOL myself, I just commented on Chapter 3, and I was only the second one there, I was also thinking this was chapter 4, oh well. Very interesting, waiting for part 4.

  • suzi xxx on Mar 7, 2010

    Oh This is getting really Good Johnny, ‘nice ears’ I laughed out loud an you know I did too. This is a great Story going on an I’m not going to say anymore, cause I see you’ve just now sent chapter 4, so I’m going to find out what’s happening next! This is been great all along its got me wanting to wonder, an not to mention a “mood po po” that’s just not a good thing, I’d be on radar, an so would others as well lol. Great Chapter Addition Johnny Thanks For Sharing.

  • sara2010 on Mar 7, 2010

    Hi, friend.

    Realy i like this good story. Its very tochable for me.

    Now i wanna read more from you.


  • sara2010 on Mar 7, 2010

    Simply i like to Give you One , Plz read below:

    Friends smile at you.
    They like your face.
    They want to be with you
    Any old place.

    Friends have fun with you.
    Friends share
    They’re glad when you’re happy—
    When you’re sad, they care.

    If you’re a friend
    Then you care, too.
    That’s why your friends
    Are glad you’re you!!!

    Thanks You

  • sambhafusia on Mar 8, 2010

    Great points to take note of..nice share..thanks for that..

  • albert1jemi on Mar 9, 2010

    good poem

  • mishee on Apr 5, 2010

    nice one!

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