A short story.

“That’s cool with me” I said “Where are you going too”

“Anywhere, can you can you please drive on?” she said

“Sure” I smiled, pushed the car into first gear and stepped on the accelerator”.

As we drove I learned her name was lee, single and very good looking, she had a unusual accent I just couldn’t place it

she looked about 40 and I noticed had no ring on her finger “do you feel any warmer” I asked?

“Yes thanks” she gave a shy smile “I suppose you deserve some sort of explanation”

 ”In your own time sweet, but it did seem kind of strange to see you there in the rain in the middle of nowhere.

Suddenly I saw in the road ahead a  large glowing object

I pulled to the side of the road and  slamed on the brakes,

“What the hell”

I could just make out through the rain the object, it was a large saucer shaped craft and was hovering about a meter above the ground

Lee screamed and pushed opened the door and ran out back into the rain

“Wait” I cried but it was to late she was gone.

The glowing craft wobbled a little and with a loud whoosh it was gone,

I sat there mesmerise for a moment the light on the open passenger door blinking

and I wondered just who I had picked up.?

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  • suzi xxx on Mar 5, 2010

    Oh that’s so cool Johnny….cause its got all the signs of a date in progress an just when you don’t believe, lol, a loud whooosh .. gone. This is a great Lil story Johnny, not to mention to read them back to back made it more interesting cause I had the part 2 comin next. thanks for sharing Johnny always. this is a great writing, fun, an dreamable to be real, to who knows, But would be a fun one to read to Lil G when he gets a little older!!??

  • carole (bishy57) on Mar 5, 2010

    Great story so far, cant wait for the next installment!

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Mar 5, 2010

    Another good piece

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  • Moira62 on Mar 5, 2010

    intrigued…hurry up with part three:)

  • jennifer eiffel01 on Mar 5, 2010

    I really like your story! Is there going to be a three anytime soon?

  • ganeshgolha on Mar 5, 2010

    Good Share

  • landiro on Mar 5, 2010

    really good tale !!

  • diamondpoet on Mar 5, 2010

    What imagination you have, riding with an alien interesting concept for this story.

  • Christine Ramsay on Mar 5, 2010

    I wasn’t expecting that ending. A fascinating story.


  • Darla Beck on Mar 5, 2010

    Very interesting!

  • Roberta on Mar 5, 2010

    So do you think that the flying saucer came to pick Lee up, roll on Part 3

  • phyllis on Mar 5, 2010

    You are very creative!!!

  • standingproud on Mar 6, 2010

    wot eva, pulling my pants down.lol

  • Shirley Shuler on Mar 7, 2010

    Good tale, Johnny, waiting for part three.

  • sambhafusia on Mar 7, 2010

    great share..thanks for that…..

  • albert1jemi on Mar 9, 2010

    beautiful words

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