A short story.
Oh that’s so cool Johnny….cause its got all the signs of a date in progress an just when you don’t believe, lol, a loud whooosh .. gone. This is a great Lil story Johnny, not to mention to read them back to back made it more interesting cause I had the part 2 comin next. thanks for sharing Johnny always. this is a great writing, fun, an dreamable to be real, to who knows, But would be a fun one to read to Lil G when he gets a little older!!??
Great story so far, cant wait for the next installment!
Another good piece
intrigued…hurry up with part three:)
I really like your story! Is there going to be a three anytime soon?
really good tale !!
What imagination you have, riding with an alien interesting concept for this story.
I wasn’t expecting that ending. A fascinating story.
So do you think that the flying saucer came to pick Lee up, roll on Part 3
You are very creative!!!
wot eva, pulling my pants down.lol
Good tale, Johnny, waiting for part three.
great share..thanks for that…..
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