A boy who survives an abusive mother.

Immediately after throwing the entire box of wooden matchsticks in the small boy’s face

She began screaming at him “you’re stupid! You’re stupid, you’ll never amount to anything!” Now the young mother was finished with her horrified four year old son as she stood up to walk out of the room and leave him trembling and sobbing uncontrollably on their living room carpeted floor. He could hear her stomping down the long hallway and then the hard slam of her bedroom door which made him wince in fear.

So, he was stupid and wouldn’t amount to anything in life ever…

It had all started when Abby had decided to teach Brian basic arithmetic.

Her grandfather had taught it to her, along with reading and spelling when she was the same age and it had a tremendous impact on her childhood. She’d graduated from high school when she was 16 and now wanted to do the same for her son.

Brian did well with the addition but when Abby began doing subtraction he became completely lost. She tried being patient and had even slowed down in her questions.

“Okay Brian, there are two match sticks there…now if I take one away what will that leave you with?”

The boy didn’t answer right away as he concentrated on the object on the floor in front of him. His forehead furrowed deeply and his young blue eyes squinted hard as he struggled for the correct answer but it was no use…the answer just wouldn’t come to him.

Finally he gave up and sighed heavily before answering his mother.

“I don’t know, mommy…” he said sadly.

“What do you mean you don’t know? Brian, if you had two and I take one away…what does that leave you with? It’s not that hard of a question!” Abby was beginning to lose her patience.

But Brian looked up at her with a frustrated and saddened look on his innocent little face.

He was also becoming nervous because he knew his mother had a very bad temper and a short fuse to ignite it with. He didn’t want to set it off today but he had no idea what the correct answer was.

“Let’s try it again, Brian…it’s okay, you’ll get it!” Abby said with a warm smile.

Now the boy relaxed visibly.

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  • IcyCucky on Feb 14, 2008

    This is a really good story, Nick.

    In reality though, I’ve come across this exact situation before.

  • Lucy Lockett on Feb 14, 2008

    Great story!

  • Nick Kenney on Feb 14, 2008

    Thanks Icy… :)

  • Nick Kenney on Feb 14, 2008

    Thanks Lucy!

  • Ruby Hawk on Feb 14, 2008

    I think its something we see all the time. Best Wishes, Ruby

  • Nick Kenney on Feb 14, 2008

    I’m afraid you’re right Ruby and it’s something that should never happen to a child…ever…

  • Alexa Gates on Feb 15, 2008

    great story!

  • Nick Kenney on Feb 15, 2008

    Thanks Alexa! I really appreciate your comment!

  • Judy Sheldon on Feb 15, 2008

    Nick, you are such a wonderful story teller. Why is it we need a license to hunt, fish, drive, but no qualifications for parenting, as if being a parent is a job anyone can do?

  • Nick Kenney on Feb 15, 2008

    Thank you Judy…you are so right. Some people should never become parents. Often the ones that have no one to watch over them are the abusive ones, there is no one to stop them. The child is completely alone and helpless.

  • ranfuchs on Feb 15, 2008

    it’s so sad that our children too often suffer from our own frustrations. I think you conveyed it really well

    ranfuchs

  • Nick Kenney on Feb 15, 2008

    Thank you Ranfuchs!

  • R.B. Parsley on Feb 16, 2008

    Nick,
    This story reminds me of the negativity that existed in my house when I was growing up. The older I got the worse it became. From the time I was old enough to understand and on into my adulthood I\’d always been told, \”You can\’t do that! Your too stupid. Not once can I ever remember my dad or mom saying a positive word to me. It was always negative. In my house I have a rule. If you can\’t say anything positive, or good, don\’t say anything at all.
    this is really a good story., Nick, It really held my interest to the end. Keep up the good work.
    Randy

  • Kris on Feb 16, 2008

    But I became more than she could ever have dreamed.

  • Nick Kenney on Feb 16, 2008

    That’s a good rule, Randy. We have one in our house that we tell the “kids” all the time and that is if you don’t want it done to you then don’t do it to anyone else! Along the same lines…
    That really upsets me to hear that about your parents. I don’t like to hear that my friends are hurting in any way…
    You’re not stupid, Randy, don’t ever let anyone tell you that!
    You’re a great writer with a lot of heart and sensitivity!

  • Francie on Feb 16, 2008

    I loved the story! I must say this unfortunately happens all too often…makes me very sad.

  • Nick Kenney on Feb 16, 2008

    Good for you Kris!
    And many thanks Francie… yes, it does happen too often…

  • KathySpring on Feb 19, 2008

    Heartbreaking Story but ohh so true

    KathySpring

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