Jeremy travels to a new world and makes a great discovery about himself but can he get home? Will the yelling stop? And who can he really trust…

Let me introduce you to a family with a rather weak son his name is Jeremy, who can hardly pick up a stone let alone a piece of paper. He has a brother who’s name is Charlie with an age of 14. Their Dad left their Mum when Charlie was 2 and their Mum (Deanna ) was pregnant with Jeremy but be warned although he cant lift things he has still got some thing extraordinary to discover about him self. And now the story begins.

“Jeremy go to the dry cleaners and pick up my” “Oh yeah I forgot about you’re… ” Charlie’s mother cut him of before he could say anymore ” CHARLIE STOP THAT YOU KNOW YOUR BROTHER IS Well…special OK NEXT TIME YOU SPEAK ABOUT IT YOU WILL BE GROUNDED TILL YOU LEAVE HOME GOT IT?” Deanna shouted madly. “Yes mooothheerrr” Charlie said snottily in a whisper “I wont”

“Jeremy didn’t know what to fell happy about his brother being grounded or angry that his brother teases him he thought to him self “maybe its time, I got back at him.” “But I’ll need help  …HM” Jeremy’s thoughts were interfered with a loud shattering noise. “AAAWAHHHH” a ghostly scream was in his ears; he ran to Deanna and asked what it was Deanna replied in the calmest voice he had ever heard “What was what darling?” Jeremy shouted in disgust “YOUR KIDDING RIGHT WHAT WAS WHAT I AM TALKING ABOUT THE SHATTERING NOISE AND THE GHOSTLY SCREAM” Deanna didn’t know what to say instead her face went pale white just like the snow pointed behind him and had a heart attack.

In hospital Charlie was always waiting outside Deanna’s room cause if he went in he would burst into tears to see her there not moving or smiling. As for Jeremy he was there by her side wishing he could hold her hand but it was too heavy! Then extraordinarily Deanna woke for her last time and said in a mere whisper ”Jeremy …it’s…time…” Jeremy said “what’s time don’t die please tell me what time you mustn’t leave ”Deanna interrupted” You are the one you must visit aunt Lope and save us all you have great strength once there I will  be gone you are on your own TELL NO ONE” Jeremy was crying now and he heard the dreadful buzzing ..She was gone his mum was dead. The nurses came running in and tried saving her but it was no use she had said all she needed to say and they were on there on. Charlie came walking in the room with red eyes Jeremy asked him “were does aunt Lope live?” Charlie crying his reply” she is dead she died when you were born .she lived in our house and now lies in green perk cemetery “ ”OK Charlie mum is dead we now are on our own but first i need you to drive me to aunt Lopery’s grave it was mums request”

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