Comments on: Henry Porter, Death by Voyeur

By: PhoenixRox

PhoenixRox — Mon, 02 Nov 2009 10:05:56 +0000

Great imagery my girl… Good good job! I am glad that it got published… Would have been a shame, otherwise.

By: Patrick Regoniel

Patrick Regoniel — Fri, 30 Oct 2009 23:47:39 +0000

A nice story with a sudden twist. Keep it up!

By: Vikram Chhabra

Vikram Chhabra — Fri, 30 Oct 2009 03:10:09 +0000

It had my rapy attention L!! Great climax and ending!

By: deep blue

deep blue — Fri, 30 Oct 2009 00:44:30 +0000

A well thought of story. Henry’s imagination was just out of place to fantasize on a man (must be a doctor) helping a lady giving birth.Well maybe Henry was reincarnated on the new born baby….This is a PG-13 blog, well thought.

By: David Crerand

David Crerand — Thu, 29 Oct 2009 12:01:45 +0000

Glad you were able to make necessary changes to get this published. It definetly warranted it. I will pm later with specific comments.

By: neet

neet — Thu, 29 Oct 2009 08:19:11 +0000

Interesting article………luvd the moral at the end.

By: Paul Roberts

Paul Roberts — Thu, 29 Oct 2009 00:47:23 +0000

Well alrighty then! I feel a little disgust for type of person described above coming out in the story mabey? Either way good morale. Friend, fan, smile

By: Ruby Hawk

Ruby Hawk — Thu, 29 Oct 2009 00:39:19 +0000

Poor Henry,

By: Frances Lawrence

Frances Lawrence — Thu, 29 Oct 2009 00:18:01 +0000

A well constructed and surprising story.

By: Mystify

Mystify — Wed, 28 Oct 2009 22:50:49 +0000

Excellent thriller Lilly!! The whole story was wonderfully crafted and had some excellent visual wording! Glad you changed it a bit so I could read it. I sure hope the baby doesn’t turn into Henry!! Fantastic write!