In contrast to her modern work environment, she kept a primitive home. This way she escaped competition for social status and expectations and demands from others.

The moment she turned into the dirt road she felt her body relax.  It was already dusk and she switched on the lights of the car, just in time to see the lights reflecting from the eyes of a small fox. 

 The disparity between this, her somewhat primitive home, and her classy work environment, never ceased to amuse her.  She worked at a research organisation with sophisticated equipment and laboratories where she had some status due to her reputation for diligence and intelligence.  There never was a problem with access to resources: whatever was needed, was at her disposal.  The buildings were imposing modern “green” structures of glass and concrete.

 In contrast to this, her home, which she owned together with a 57ha piece of empty bushveld, was a simple square structure, with one very large kitchen, dining room, and lounge, flanked by a bathroom and two bedrooms.  The floors were dull raw cement and the furniture, carpets and curtains were unmatched, uninspired and mostly handed down from parents and previous apartments.

 What set this further apart from her work environment, was the fact that the home was not linked to the national electricity grid, which lit up all the smallholdings around them.  She used a mixture of gas, generator, and wood to energize a strange combination of appliances.  The most primitive of these was the use of a “donkey” to heat bath water – an oil drum installed at roof height above a small furnace outside the bathroom window, and stoked with wood and paper to provide 200 litres of furiously boiling water.  A Lister engine drove the water pump to fill a large green tank with water necessary for household needs.

 She never invited anyone from work to this home, 30km outside of the bustling city.

 A research organisation has its share of eccentrics: Old cars, people walking or cycling to work in a pedestrian and cycling unfriendly city, professionals in jeans and T-shirts. These were proportionally much higher than in other corporate environments and her old Audi 100 could be a sign of a non-materialistic lifestyle.  This dark, run-down house without amenities, empty food cupboards, assortment of dogs, geese, cats and haphazard vegetable garden would have lifted the eyebrows.

 She loved this place – this anachronism of time and place and expectations.

 She nosed the Audi into the yard.   As she got out of the car, the dogs fought to be first to smell her clothes and sniff the tyres of the car.  The last small group of hadedas flew high overhead, slicing open the sky with their jagged voices, letting in a slight breeze and lifting the heavy heat of the day from the darkening landscape.

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  • Peace Poet on Feb 12, 2011

    hello. I am thankful to Triond ADMIN. and staff for enabling me to meet such a learned friend like you. The opening lines of your article are very original. and reveal a way how to cope with the postmodern materialism :
    “In contrast to her modern work environment, she kept a primitive home. This way she escaped competition for social status and expectations and demands from others”

    These lineswill remain my favorite throughout my life. What an amazing technique to escape from the stress of life!. I have voted your great article. God is very kind to me that through Triond I met you, and felt enlightened by your extraordinary post. Best wishes. I shall fully support your writings here. Best wishes

  • Steven West on Feb 12, 2011

    Excellent piece of work. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

  • CHIPMUNK on Feb 13, 2011

    well written great work

  • Francois Hagnere on Feb 13, 2011

    Extremely well written and meaningful. Thank you so much.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Feb 13, 2011

    Great story to share.

  • Edsss on Feb 15, 2011

    I like this story! Good share madam.

  • lxdollarsxl on Feb 15, 2011

    i presume this is the start of a novel? If so quite inventive.

  • elnavann on Feb 15, 2011

    Thank you all for your positive comments. Yes – I think this character and the setting are part of a novel. My storyline is still lacking – I am discarding one idea after the other . .

  • Starpisces on Feb 15, 2011

    a great share, thank you.

  • Raj the Tora on Feb 15, 2011

    very intriguing. Looking forward for more. Thanks.

  • Bruce Officer on Feb 16, 2011

    Shame she has to drive such a distance to work every day, though, which must make it a very un-green lifestyle.

  • Burning Ice on Feb 17, 2011

    Well, that’s having a taste of the old times mixed with the modern times. :)

  • Xandine on Feb 19, 2011

    Excellent work

  • Val Mills on Feb 20, 2011

    This is a beautiful piece of writing

  • pippe vonkuhne on Feb 21, 2011

    Once again a celestial grand finale: escaping from rat race competition to: “The last small group of hadedas flew high overhead, slicing open the sky with their jagged voices, letting in a slight breeze and lifting the heavy heat of the day from the darkening landscape.” Awesome!

  • d1dezire on Mar 1, 2011

    the introduction was so captivating. good one.

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