The first article I shared here in Triond was Hope and Doubt. I can say they are my favorite characters that is why I’m sharing another article about them. This time they’ve decided to visit a new place.

If you were transferred to a new place,how would you react? Are you with Hope? or with Doubt?

                                             Image via Wikipedia

The two long time friends,Hope and Doubt decided to visit a place called Sweet Ville.

  • Arrival to the Place

Hope: Wow,this place feels like home.

Doubt:Let’s leave, we’re not in Rome.

Hope: We’ve just arrived. It’s a lovely place.

Doubt: It’s like where out in space.

Hope: Let’s look around before you’ll decide that it’s not likeable.

Doubt:It’s like winter here not fall.

Hope:We should love all the season.

Doubt: Give me one reason.

  • Meeting new people

Doubt:The people look sour not sweet.

Hope: We should try to mingle with them before you Tweet.

Doubt: I don’t want to be the first one to approach.

Hope: I think they feel the same.I’ll just step in like a coach.

Doubt: Don’t, they don’t want to be bothered.

Hope: I’ve got to try ,I’ll go where they are gathered.

Do you think there’s Hope in Sweet Ville or Not?Or Doubt would fill the place and the people?

Are you in Doubt or full of Hope?

This story needs a continuation but for now you ,the reader, would be the one to decide.

                                                                    Image via Wikipedia

My first two Hope and Doubt articles:

Hope and Doubt

Hope and Doubt Two

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  • papaleng on Aug 15, 2010

    I go for Hope.

  • Joie Schmidt on Aug 15, 2010

    What a unique, interesting piece!

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Joie Schmidt.

  • Dee Gold on Aug 16, 2010

    Thanks, papaleng and Joie for leaving comments

  • 1hopefulman on Aug 17, 2010

    Very nice! Can you guess the way I would look at things? LOL

  • Mr Ghaz on Aug 27, 2010

    lovely story..Thanks for sharing :) .

  • mysocalledlife on Sep 15, 2010

    nice story, just in time, i’m moving on a new company next month, i’ll sure remember hope’s point of views…. no room for doubts! thanks dee

  • Phoenix Montoya on Nov 6, 2010

    I go hope for too, Dee. This is very inspiring.

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