A very unusual tale about early life in the Alberta badlands. Do you know what happened?

 

The year was 1878, mother and father had settled some land a few years back, in a region of the western Canadian prairies. The winters were cold and the summers very hot and dry. We had often had to carry buckets of water from the river just to water the crops and give to the animals in the summer. This year we did not have too many animals left.

Winter had been hard, and long, last summer we had experienced weeks where the temperature did not fall below 100 Fahrenheit for days and lots of things died. Our last cow, was killed last summer by a rattlesnake, mother would not even let us eat the meat for fear of poison. Father did kill the snake with an ax, we ate it. But do you know what he did? Somehow father manged to leave the ax lying around after bringing the snake in, and we never found the ax again.

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At that point pretty much the only thing left to eat was each other or the chickens. So we ate most of them. We had to keep a rooster so we would have chicks, and we kept two hens also, because with out a hen, the rooster is not much use. And if one hen died at least we had another. We use to do the same thing with rabbits, mother would say we needed a hare and a spare. But our rabbits got killed the year flies were so bad that they laid eggs on the rabbits bums and the maggots ate the bunnies before we could. It’s called Fly Strike. Mother said if we were hungry we could eat the maggots. Do you know what we did? We ate the bunnies and maggot too! We cooked them in a stew. They tasted like chicken.

It was June of 1878. Mother and father had been trying to get our garden going, we were eating the very last of our rations from last winter. They planted tomatoes, corn, potatoes, and zucchini. Deer had eaten the corn as it came up, we are not really sure what dug up the potatoes, but something got them. Father thought it was the cat, he killed it with the shovel, since we no longer had an ax. Do you know what we did? We ate the cat.

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  • Lostash on Jun 13, 2009

    I loved this B!!! Brought a smile to my face!! Is it loosely based on factual events of life in those times????????

  • clay hurtubise on Jun 13, 2009

    Captivating story, keep going!
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • ken bultman on Jun 13, 2009

    Damn, Nelson.

  • California Dreamer on Jun 13, 2009

    Very compelling story. Sometimes things are so tough, you have to decide what to do if want to live. It reminds me of a movie I watched about a group crashed in snow, they actually did have to live on some who died, to keep alive. It may sound a bit sickening to some, but then think, if it was you there, what would you of done… Great story, keep up the good work :)

  • Brenda Nelson on Jun 13, 2009

    thought it up this morning as I planted what was left of the plants we bought 2 weeks ago for the garden – it has been a crazy year for us, we still had frost and it got several of our plants. I was thinking how lucky we are to live in a time when we dont have to depend on our garden for survival

    I did have a bunny die that way, Fly Strike is very real :( but we didnt eat her. (or the maggots)

  • Mark Gordon Brown on Jun 13, 2009

    I know what happened. I read the title!

  • PR Mace on Jun 13, 2009

    Wow, interesting story. I am waiting for the rest of it and I bet I have seen it posted so here I go to read it.

  • Deep Blue on Jun 13, 2009

    Yap Gordon was right, such a lovely bizarre story to happen. Must have been a story idea for the twilight zone tv series. Very well crafted. Poor mother, it must have been hard for her.

  • Pinaki Ghosh on Jun 13, 2009

    Nicely written.

  • Ramalingam on Jun 13, 2009

    A terrible story of the struggle for existence.Thanks for sharing.

  • Daisy Peasblossom on Jun 13, 2009

    lol. I could see this one coming…glad you left us to fill in the punchline.

  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 14, 2009

    Oh poor mother. I liked your story. It kept my interest right to the end.

  • Jo Oliver on Jun 15, 2009

    Very well done short story. Really strikes a nerve with how lucky we are in this time period. Few if any people today really know what famine and poverty is.

  • Bo Russo on Jun 16, 2009

    Very funny.But I suspected all along,I’m just wondering if dad hid the axe on purpose.

  • hiho on Jun 16, 2009

    I was really enjoying this up until the bit about the father volunteering to be eaten..it reminds me a bit of a horror movie called ‘American Gothic’.

  • sweetievee on Jun 18, 2009

    lol! Father volunteered but I take it they ended up killing the mother?! Obviously since the piece is entitled: How I Lost My Mother!

  • Karen Gross on Jun 18, 2009

    My family would have to either starve to death or eat me too if we had to depend on our gardening and hunting skills to survive! You captured the desperation of the situation very well, I was in agony for them whenever the next disaster came up.

    Great story!

  • Ravana on Jun 20, 2009

    A twilight zone kind of story. I love the way it leads the reader to decide the ending.
    I would be waiting for your minding factory to churn out more of the unpredictable ones.

  • Ravana on Jun 20, 2009

    * mind factory :)

  • spoontablechair on Jul 3, 2009

    Wow. That was disturbing. I think it’s kind of clear how the story ends though. :) Good job.

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