A very unusual tale about early life in the Alberta badlands. Do you know what happened?

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We had a bad spring, it got hot in the day and would not rain, but nights were cold and we got frost. Frost killed most of our plants even though mother and father would go out and cover and uncover them every night. A week went by, we were looking for dandelions to eat, as we had pretty much eaten everything else. Father could not even find any deer to hunt, but if he had I don’t know how he would have killed them. Our old neighbours took our gun and we never got it back, it was never found even after we found them. Zucchini usually make lots of food and make it fast, so we were hoping for that.

Then one morning after we had not seen frost for a week, it happened, we got frost again. Our crops were devastated. Mother was devastated. But mostly father was devastated. He knew what was next.

Three years ago, our neighbours were starving. They came one day for our gun so they could go hunting, we never saw them again. Do you know what they did? It looks like they were not very good hunters. We found them dead in their home. Mother, Father, and their two children. Starved to death.

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Mother and father had then decided if it ever got like that for them, that it would just be better to eat a family member and thus keep the rest of us alive. Father volunteered that if it should ever come to that, he would be it.

So the day came to kill father. It was rather difficult. He was naturally stronger than all of us, and even though he tried not to, he naturally fought back. We tried throwing rocks at him, but he kept running around. It was incredibly difficult to kill somebody who volunteered to be killed. Eventually, covered, with sweat, we agreed to give up. We were all weak from lack of food anyhow.

We would try again tomorrow. Tonight mother and father would talk about what to do, after all if we did not have something to eat, we would all die.

Do you know what we did?

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  • Lostash on Jun 13, 2009

    I loved this B!!! Brought a smile to my face!! Is it loosely based on factual events of life in those times????????

  • clay hurtubise on Jun 13, 2009

    Captivating story, keep going!
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • ken bultman on Jun 13, 2009

    Damn, Nelson.

  • California Dreamer on Jun 13, 2009

    Very compelling story. Sometimes things are so tough, you have to decide what to do if want to live. It reminds me of a movie I watched about a group crashed in snow, they actually did have to live on some who died, to keep alive. It may sound a bit sickening to some, but then think, if it was you there, what would you of done… Great story, keep up the good work :)

  • Brenda Nelson on Jun 13, 2009

    thought it up this morning as I planted what was left of the plants we bought 2 weeks ago for the garden – it has been a crazy year for us, we still had frost and it got several of our plants. I was thinking how lucky we are to live in a time when we dont have to depend on our garden for survival

    I did have a bunny die that way, Fly Strike is very real :( but we didnt eat her. (or the maggots)

  • Mark Gordon Brown on Jun 13, 2009

    I know what happened. I read the title!

  • PR Mace on Jun 13, 2009

    Wow, interesting story. I am waiting for the rest of it and I bet I have seen it posted so here I go to read it.

  • Deep Blue on Jun 13, 2009

    Yap Gordon was right, such a lovely bizarre story to happen. Must have been a story idea for the twilight zone tv series. Very well crafted. Poor mother, it must have been hard for her.

  • Pinaki Ghosh on Jun 13, 2009

    Nicely written.

  • Ramalingam on Jun 13, 2009

    A terrible story of the struggle for existence.Thanks for sharing.

  • Daisy Peasblossom on Jun 13, 2009

    lol. I could see this one coming…glad you left us to fill in the punchline.

  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 14, 2009

    Oh poor mother. I liked your story. It kept my interest right to the end.

  • Jo Oliver on Jun 15, 2009

    Very well done short story. Really strikes a nerve with how lucky we are in this time period. Few if any people today really know what famine and poverty is.

  • Bo Russo on Jun 16, 2009

    Very funny.But I suspected all along,I’m just wondering if dad hid the axe on purpose.

  • hiho on Jun 16, 2009

    I was really enjoying this up until the bit about the father volunteering to be eaten..it reminds me a bit of a horror movie called ‘American Gothic’.

  • sweetievee on Jun 18, 2009

    lol! Father volunteered but I take it they ended up killing the mother?! Obviously since the piece is entitled: How I Lost My Mother!

  • Karen Gross on Jun 18, 2009

    My family would have to either starve to death or eat me too if we had to depend on our gardening and hunting skills to survive! You captured the desperation of the situation very well, I was in agony for them whenever the next disaster came up.

    Great story!

  • Ravana on Jun 20, 2009

    A twilight zone kind of story. I love the way it leads the reader to decide the ending.
    I would be waiting for your minding factory to churn out more of the unpredictable ones.

  • Ravana on Jun 20, 2009

    * mind factory :)

  • spoontablechair on Jul 3, 2009

    Wow. That was disturbing. I think it’s kind of clear how the story ends though. :) Good job.

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