It’s a short story about a guy who has different personalities and talks to himself.

-Admit it. You hate that person. – Yan said, pissing himself off.

-I don’t! I don’t hate anyone…- He replied to himself.

-Don’t lie to yourself. Both you and I know you hate that person, and you hate everyone else. You hate humanity, why won’t you just admit it? - Said Yan.

-Because I really don’t! The one who hates everyone is YOU, not me. - Replied Yan again.

-Hahaha! You idiot, I AM YOU! - He laughed in a foolish tone.

-You…- Yan stuttered. -You are not me. You are a part of me, the part that wants to spread horrible thoughts to everyone.-

-Hold on a sec’! Those are YOUR thoughts and feelings, it’s not my fault you just hide your feelings… C’mon, you know that letting me take control will ease you off a bit, you’ll feel better and relieved once you let me express yourself. - Said Yan with a horrible grin on his face.

-Some feelings are not to be exposed, Yan…- He replied. -I don’t want to hurt anyone, and I don’t want to hurt myself.-

-See? That’s what makes YOU weak. You’re just acting like a scum. Why don’t you show your superiority to those scums? Why don’t you admit you feel hate? - He tried to convince himself.

-…- Yan had no replies for a second. But he realized something. –If I ever had to say I hated someone, I’d say it is you.-

-But as I said before, you dumbass, I am you. - The other one said in an ironic tone.

-I know right? I guess we’ll have to get along a bit more. - Yan said sarcastically and smiling in a funny way to himself.

-Whatever you want to do, asshole. – Said Yan, reaching is hand into himself. –But you changed the topic… Tell me, how much you hate that person again?

Yan shook Yan’s hand in a sign of getting along but hating each other at the same time. Then he shrank back and answered. -Didn’t I tell you already? I hate no one. Can’t you just leave the topic?-

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Comments (10)
  • aheed411 on Feb 25, 2012

    Wow

  • erwinkennythomas on Feb 25, 2012

    interesting

  • dwisuka on Feb 25, 2012

    yes, interesting :)

  • mdrkarim7 on Feb 25, 2012

    Thanks for writing..

  • rgreenfield on Feb 26, 2012

    quite intriguing… thanks for sharing.

  • Eunike on Feb 26, 2012

    Good writing

  • Eliza26 on Feb 27, 2012

    Interesting piece. Well written.

  • Nes on Feb 27, 2012

    thats different, and very interesting to read good job.

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Feb 28, 2012

    I like it.keep up a good work dear

  • Moses Ingram on Mar 12, 2012

    I like this. Would you consider writing a series like this? Check out my artices and read a series I wrote a couple of years ago called The constant Chatter. It starts with a baby talking, even before he is born.

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