Wilderness, to sacrifice.

Things in our life seem to be broken, the sky that lengthen our faces and the rainbow of success, but one day my eye deeply close  because of the snow that come and landed in to my eyes, the roof of our house is destroyed by the snow ball and the typhoon, i wished to mama Mary to help me to fly in the sky and make some adventure and journeys to experience the richness of the earth given by god the nature, while I’m flying away from home my mother seen me at the window, she said o my god what happen to you your flying, yes mom I’m flying and i don’t know why this is amazing very great, i love it.

A days come the boy seem to be suck and get high pride, he travel so far, the forest that full of Trees and mountain he dint not think any thing that happen to him, he just go so far away until he dint not know were to go back again, one morning………….to be continued………….

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  • peterthompson on Sep 26, 2011

    Is this prose supposed to make the reader feel what’s it like to be mentally retarded because it certainly accomplishes it! You are a brave man to be so handicapped yet so fearless of derision and mocking. I am a fan! Sign me up!

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