When a sheriff’s posse abandoned its search for two fleeing felons I struck out looking for them on my own. The sheriff was right. They had left the area and were captured in south Alabama, returned to Florida to stand trial for bank robbery and attempted murder. I, of course, did not located them but instead stumbled upon an age old encampment of Calusa Indians thought to be instinct since two centuries after the first white explorers set foot in the Florida peninsula.


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The native who: approached me, Jacob, as it turned out, was the only one in the camp who spoke any English at all.  He advised me he had not spent all his childhood in the encampment but had little recollection of his whereabouts.  What he described suggested some manner of metropolitan area and he recalled a building in which there was a room with a black wall that he could “…make marks on with a white stick.”  A school house, I surmised.  He said he fled and made his way back to his family while still young “…not yet of breeding age.”
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The camp consisted mainly of large living quarters with thatched roofs made from palm fronds with mostly open walls.  It appeared to be a communal arrangement with no evidence of family units.  All the males watched me from one side of the compound, the children played together randomly as though it was a perpetual recess and the women went about their business, many of them tending to the gardens in the large fields surrounding the camp.  A community cooking area highlighted the central area where a large caldron of water was kept over an open flame.  The fall harvest was underway; corn having already been picked and cabbages and other cool weather crops were ripening.  It was obvious the tribe did not fertilize the land and production was very poor.  Cabbage heads were no larger that grapefruit although there were many of them.  Jacob told me much of the camp’s food source came from the surrounding tundra and nearby lake–alligator, snake, squirrel, turkey, crane, turtle, fish, cabbage palm, mushrooms and citrus.

The tribe had neither calendar nor clock.  Age was calculated only by the number of full moons one had survived.  There was no obesity noted but the females were of thick-bodied structure while the males tended to be ultra-slender in stature.   Males showed no indication of facial hair but no one cut their hair.   Men used cattail leaves to tie their unkempt hair while the women allow their well-groomed tresses to flow freely, some ankle length–a few dragging the ground.

Most of the elderly had goiters of various sizes suggesting a lack of iodine in the diet.  The tribe kept no cattle or goats so the only milk came from the mother’s breast.  I saw children as old as nine or ten continuing to nurse.  This could account for a calcium deficiency resulting in most of the older tribal members being toothless or nearly so.  Even adolescents’ smiles showed teeth badly in need of attention.

Soon Jacob nervously nudged me away from the compound.  “The elder want you go,” he whispered.  I was going as the hour was getting late and I had nothing with me except the tools of a reporter–a pen and a notebook.  Tomorrow, things will be different.  I’ll be quite a bit more prepared to document the miracle I have found in this place of hundreds of years ago.  I told Jacob I would return.  He shook his head vigorously, his scraggly hair flying about his frightened face.  This was too big…it was going to set me free.  I had to return.  I absently removed another mushroom from my pocket and began gnawing as I departed.

(To be continued)

See:  http://authspot.com/novels/I Found The Lost Tribe of Lake Reedy: Part One   
 

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  • Reilley on Dec 16, 2009

    Very descriptive. I’m interested to see where you go with this.

  • ceegirl on Dec 16, 2009

    Nice article

  • PR Mace on Dec 16, 2009

    Better stay away from those mushrooms, Ken. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

  • Marie Antoinette on Dec 16, 2009

    Oh, my God another sleepless night! I hope tomorrow I see another chapter, I can’t wait to see what happens. This is real stuff, true adventure!

  • Val Mills on Dec 16, 2009

    You’re really going to spin this one out, aren’t you :-) See you tomorrow, no doubt!

  • Ruby Hawk on Dec 16, 2009

    Uh Oh,the mushrooms, I think I see where this is going.

  • AlmaG on Dec 16, 2009

    This is really very interesting it’s like watching National Geographic :D

  • Jamie Myles on Dec 16, 2009

    You have my interest! can’twait to see where your going with this.

  • Goodselfme on Dec 16, 2009

    You are a good story teller with a good content. No wonder you never reported this, you might have had to join this bunch because of a lack of a job.

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Dec 16, 2009

    Great content..looking forward to your next chapter.

  • standingproud on Dec 17, 2009

    just make sure you have salt in ya pocket tooo,lol

  • Warriors on Dec 17, 2009

    Thanks for your share ken…

  • johnnydod on Dec 17, 2009

    This has been a great mini series Ken…

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 17, 2009

    This is so captivating, Ken. I too can’t wait for the next installment.

    Christine

  • Kate Smedley on Dec 17, 2009

    I hope the mushrooms are safe!! Keep these coming, you create a compelling story Ken. Must say though, I’m glad my age isn’t calculated by the number of full moons I’ve survived, is that like dog years? lol

  • Lady Sunshine on Dec 17, 2009

    You are such a tease. :P

  • Yovita Siswati on Dec 17, 2009

    Interesting story!

  • deep blue on Dec 17, 2009

    Very well written. I must tell you don’t ever come back in there Ken. There’s plenty of cow’s milk on this side of civilization and of course you couldn’t expect to be nursed there (you’re way beyond 9). Without internet and blogging, don’t do things you will regret.

  • Lord Banks on Dec 17, 2009

    Brilliant well done.

  • lillyrose on Dec 17, 2009

    OOoooo….This is so good! I am excited to read the next part, they have a fairly good diet I thought, good job I don’t live there though, I was crap at breast feeding!

  • Darla Smith on Dec 17, 2009

    A very interesting story!

  • Emma Green on Dec 17, 2009

    Very descriptive and interesting part 2!

  • bailieman on Dec 17, 2009

    Got me hooked, Ken.

  • diamondpoet on Dec 17, 2009

    I am enjoying this story about this lost civilization, very exciting, I’ll be looking for your name tomorrow. Thanks for sharing Ken.

  • mkd1788 on Dec 18, 2009

    good story..nice to read..

  • ashan1614 on Dec 18, 2009

    I’m with diamondpoet on this one. I’m anxious to read the rest of your story!

  • krishnarain on Dec 19, 2009

    Liked very much. U have a great writing style…My best wishes to U.

  • wonder on Dec 23, 2009

    Franklin survived gnawing leather and you ,mushrooms.Its all about survival of the fittest.A great adventure.

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