Another chapter in the second book of the "Trip" trilogy. This book is called "Dog Trip" and like the first book, Drug Trip, is told in a style of line of consciousness. Here I am reminded of an earlier time and share some special moments with you. Enjoy!

First I’d quickly jab her in the side after asking her if she knew of the TV series  “Gumby and Pokey”, then I’d use my knee to knock inward the knee of her leg that was supporting her weight. She’d buckle down, catching herself by grabbing onto the Formica counter top.

The Formica was relatively new, and it bore just one scar. Our parents were proud of the new counter top, for it was as très chic in the late 60’s as granite is today. One night, during another of Mom’s home cooked suppers, they had mentioned how strong and durable the glimmering new countertop was. Naturally, that piqued Monica’s interest. While doing dishes that night, after thoroughly cleaning the meat clever, she swung down on the corner of the Formica right in front of the sink. That scar stayed there over a dozen years. Our folks were non-to pleased to learn of her amateur testing of the speckled Formica with the custom brown edge work.  I think they left it there extra long, just to remind her to think before swinging.

After the kneeing, a chase would incur, and  eventually I’d always lose: but it was worth it. She would punish me by pinning me down and tickling me till I was on the verge of puking. She’d laugh, and then walk away while exclaiming, “That’ll teach you” It never did.

Perhaps fate was trying to teach me a lesson one night. After giving her the knee for the umpteenth time, I ran up the creaky old staircase to try and escape her punishment. The previous day the worn holy carpet had been removed from the stairs. Unbeknownst to all, one nail remained. It was the type with an extra large head, like a roofing nail. It was protruding on the top of the thirteenth stair, the top step. Old New England often had exactly thirteen steps and our Dad was quick to point this out to visitors. “Know why old homes have thirteen steps?” “No” “To get to one floor from another” For him, the joke never wore thin, even as the carpet did.

So I slipped and fell on the luckiest of steps and my knee made a nice graceful arch on top of that remaining nail. Immediately I sensed something was wrong beyond the normal ouch. With my hand pressed firmly against my knee, I went back downstairs to find our Dad. Monica instinctively knew something was wrong, and quietly followed me to the black leather chair that clutched our father. “Dad, I think I need to go to the hospital” “Oh, why is that?” For the first time since falling, I removed my hand from knee. There wasn’t much blood, but a thick long piece of flesh dropped down alongside my leg, dangling there like the proverbial fish out of water. The large chunk of pink flesh was attached by just a sliver of skin, and after looking at it in awe, I mean, it was just soooo cool, I popped it back into place and replaced my hand over my knee. “See?” While he quickly put his pipe down in the little car shaped pipe holder I had bought him for his birthday, Monica was running into the kitchen to give our Mom the latest news bulletin.

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  • C Jordan on Dec 6, 2009

    A really good read. Well told!

  • Bo Russo on Dec 6, 2009

    Wow, I had a Sister Agnes too, but her name was Sister Bernadine, a total evil bitch.

  • Goodselfme on Dec 6, 2009

    Tx for the most articulated event I ever experienced online. I felt I was there too.

  • Aaron Paul Hicks on Dec 6, 2009

    Great read Clay, just like your former work……it had me gripped from the start, well done and look forward to reading more,

    P.S why cant i find you on facebook anymore????

    very best seasonal greetings,
    Aaron :)

  • deep blue on Dec 6, 2009

    A catching story of childhood innocence. I took my elementary at an Assumption School managed by nuns when I was 6 and your account brought back memories. You have an extreme eye for detail in your narration. How I wish I could take hold a copy of your book with your autograph. I was wondering how much it was priced there in the US/Canada.

  • Papa Sparks on Dec 6, 2009

    I enjoyed reading this a lot; liked the way that it flowed and the way that you developed the story.

    What are your plans for this?

  • LOVELYHONEY on Dec 6, 2009

    WOW WOW WOW AND AGAIN WOWOW

  • A.Mo on Dec 6, 2009

    I liked the bit where one boy vomited on sister agnus
    Funny
    :)

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Dec 6, 2009

    A very good story that potrayed the childhood dillema. Great read, you’ve my claps!

  • Karen Gross on Dec 7, 2009

    Good story, very well told.

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 7, 2009

    That was a really good story, Clay. You had me hooked right through. I remember the nuns at the convent I went to. Why is it religious people often turn out to be such bullies?

    Christine

  • Francois Hagnere on Dec 7, 2009

    You are so talented! very detailed and beautifully narrated. Bravo!

  • giftarist on Dec 7, 2009

    Enjoyed reading this..nice one!

  • Mark Gordon Brown on Dec 7, 2009

    I think I missed how you got stitches, was that nun related too? What a nasty world some parents placed their kids in, unknowing,and unbeleiving I suspect. As an adult did you ever go back and stand up to them?

  • Ruby Hawk on Dec 7, 2009

    It’s a lot different in schools now. If teachers behaved so badly they would likely end up in jail. Most of them back then were a mean lot. I enjoyed reading your story.

  • James DeVere on Dec 7, 2009

    I’m with LoveHoney. Great seeing you fighting back after all the horror.

    Nice . j

  • drelayaraja on Dec 8, 2009

    Wonderful write. I like it very much

  • Francy on Dec 9, 2009

    Long but wonderfully done.
    Keep sharing.

  • Kate Smedley on Dec 9, 2009

    Wonderful stuff, entertaining and gripping and I just love the title! I agree with Christine’s comment too.

  • Ruby Hawk on Dec 9, 2009

    Clay,you get another I like.

  • h20ho on Dec 10, 2009

    I enjoyed reading your story. Thanks

  • xoxo on Dec 10, 2009

    An enjoyable read. Thanks.

  • lillyrose on Dec 10, 2009

    It’s so lovely to read of your younger life with your family! A lot of the things you described here could just as well have been my brother and I and we had formica tops too! xxxx

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Dec 11, 2009

    Wow a really engaging story it was such a enjoyable read that I wait in anticipation for what’s next. :)

  • cutedrishti8 on Dec 11, 2009

    Enjoyed a lot reading this nice one..

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Dec 11, 2009

    an enjoyable read…

  • S A JOHNSON on Dec 11, 2009

    That was a great story! I’m SO glad she was put in her place.

  • julianhw on Dec 13, 2009

    Yup childhood sucks. I really enjoyed reading this Clay – it held my attention to the end.

  • Joshua Miguel on Dec 13, 2009

    i’m catching up clay, this is a good read. i’m scrolling back and reading your previous post. really nice job.

  • PR Mace on Dec 14, 2009

    Excellent read.

  • AlmaG on Dec 14, 2009

    A very good story! I’d like to know more.. :)

  • lillyrose on Dec 17, 2009

    just dropping by xxx

  • Atanacio on Dec 21, 2009

    wow, I really enjoyed this piece of writing you are indeed talented

  • standingproud on Dec 21, 2009

    I so appreciate true life stories.
    A cute we fellow you were
    Thank you.

  • thuanynguyen on Dec 29, 2009

    Great story!

  • qasimdharamsy on Jan 2, 2010

    Very Well Written…

  • princess serenity on Jan 3, 2010

    Did the doctor forgot to put anesthesia again on your second time? Is the Sister Agnus still teaching? She was not kicked out?

  • lovenluck on Jan 4, 2010

    well written
    happy new year

  • thuanynguyen on Jan 4, 2010

    Im back again! Reading it for the 2nd time. :)

  • Jane Jane on Jan 4, 2010

    good read. this is really long huh but you made it interesting.

  • diamondpoet on Jan 4, 2010

    I really enjoyed reading, wonderful job.

  • V rank on Jan 6, 2010

    It is just like what I was expecting from you based from the previous chapters of this… what a good potential…

  • fashion girl on Jan 7, 2010

    A beautiful, heart-touching story that moved me deeply…

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jan 7, 2010

    i haven;t read the full series but i liked the kneeing part of it we all love it don’t we gr8888888888

  • Themax on Jan 7, 2010

    Great and a very beautiful and inspiring article with full of beautiful thoughts my friend,Please do share more :)

  • gangu786 on Jan 8, 2010

    nice one

  • Phill Senters on Jan 11, 2010

    A great read Clay, I found myself as angry as your dad was.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Jan 12, 2010

    I reread your story again. As usual, your articles always win a heart.

  • tonywriter on Jan 13, 2010

    very good article and nice story ,Thanx!

  • Ruby Hawk on Jan 13, 2010

    Clay, get on the stick man and write something new. I keep looking and I see nothing new.

  • amilia snow on Jan 13, 2010

    love your stories, it is so captivating.

  • Mushtaq on Jan 17, 2010

    Nice to read. Also I like the way you presented the article’s name

  • Francois Hagnere on Mar 3, 2010

    So nice to read again these memories. Thank you Clay.

  • swatilohani on Mar 4, 2010

    compelling

  • swatilohani on Mar 4, 2010

    a great flow

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