Sometimes things aren’t as they seem. A kind word or deed can mean so much and make all the difference in the world to one of God’s creatures.

The page before me is blank…a canvas waiting to be painted.

The day is dark and gloomy, a cold rain pours from the heavens.

I long to leave West Virginia, there is nothing here for me anymore but I’ve nowhere to go. I am homeless and alone. I wander through the fields and hillsides in search of food but find none. My coat is drenched and I am chilled to the bone but no one cares, no one notices. I am alone in my misery. I offer a kind nod of my head to strangers but they only glare in return.

I don’t understand what it is that I’ve done to anger them but I quietly leave the area.

It’s been days since I found even garbage to eat and my belly aches from emptiness.

I don’t know where to go or what to do so I just keep moving.

I long for a kind word, a warm smile from someone, anyone, but find none.

The world has become a cruel place to me and each new day only offers emptiness and pain. Death would be a welcomed relief.

I once had a loving family but that was a very long time ago. I cherish my memories.

A bitter divorce ended our bliss and forever changed my life.

People now look at me with disgust and contempt. They don’t understand how I came to be at this low point in my life and they’re not interested in hearing my story so I say nothing…I just lower my head and move on.

I am so cold… the rain has become very heavy and I long for warmth, food and fresh water to quench my thirst. But I know better than to hope for any of these creature comforts, for I shall not ever find them again. I shall have to be content with scraps of garbage that strangers have thrown out and for mouthfuls of river water as I continue to wander through this magnificent mountainous state.

It doesn’t matter anymore. I am dying. Sickness fills my ravaged body. Soon my life will end and no one will remember me.

No one shall grieve for me. No one shall even notice that I am gone.

I only want my suffering and emptiness to end…to find peace at last.

As my wandering continues on this day I spy a sandwich wrapper on the other side of a highway. Although I resign myself to the fact that it’s probably just a wrapper without even a morsel of food left in it, I can’t resist the lure and focus my full attention on it as I head towards it.

Death is instantaneous as a car runs over the top of my malnourished and underweight body.

I wonder…did the occupants even notice me? Do they feel any remorse for my death?

I have found peace at last…I shall never hunger again…

I have crossed the Rainbow Bridge and will forever run and play through Heaven’s fields.

My name in life was “Rascal” and I was considered beautiful by my human family, although to the rest of the world I was only a stray dog…

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  • Anne Lyken-Garner on Apr 21, 2008

    Oh, so sweet, yet so sad.

  • IcyCucky on Apr 21, 2008

    Anne took the words out of my head, Nick!
    It is such a sad image..

  • R.B. Parsley on Apr 21, 2008

    Nick,
    You sure know how to make a guy cry. I felt every painful word of what Rascal went through. I shall quote, So beautiful and yet so sad. Excellent job Nick!!! You are a fantastic writer who not only knows his way around trucking but pets as well. You’ve outdone yourself. Really touching. Keep up the great work old buddy!!!
    Randy

  • Darlene McFarlane on Apr 22, 2008

    This story broke my heart. My mom used to say if you dislike an actor playing the roll of an offensive person,then they have done their job well. If you read a writer’s work that makes you uncomfortable but you can’t put it down then they are a great writer. I squirmed while reading this one, you held my attention as I read though a blur of tears.

    This is an excellent piece of work, Nick

    sniff, sniff.

  • Nick Kenney on Apr 22, 2008

    WOW! I am so honored!! You, yourself are such a wonderful writer, Darlene…thank you so much!! I passed a beautiful red dog looking for garbage in the median the other day in West Virginia and it was cold and raining…I wanted so badly to stop and bring him home…I think if it’d been my truck I would’ve.

  • KathySpring on Apr 22, 2008

    Poor Dog…Now you’ve done it I have leaky eye ball syndrome. I’ll be crying about this for sometime now. Wonderful Poem..vivid and description..and emotional. Keep up the great work.
    Kathy

  • Nick Kenney on Apr 22, 2008

    Sorry Kathy…it made me sad when I wrote it…

  • Lucy Lockett on Apr 24, 2008

    I was so looking forward to reading this when I saw your name, now I am crying and a feeling rather sad. I thought the story was beautifully executed, very real and my cat is called Rascal. You have a way of reaching into people’s hearts with your unique observations and perspective. Thank you Nick!

  • Nick Kenney on Apr 24, 2008

    WOW! Again I am honored! Thank you so much Lucy! You, my writer friends mean so much to me and your kind words touch me deeply.

  • deepbluesea on Apr 24, 2008

    That was wonderful and really pulled at my heartstrings!!

  • Nick Kenney on Apr 24, 2008

    Thank you deepbluesea and thanks so much for stopping by!

  • Dawn S. on Apr 26, 2008

    That was so sad. Now that I have stopped crying. Well done Nick, I see animals like that and wonder but you wrote it with such skill! Take Care.

  • Francie on Apr 26, 2008

    This story was well told but sadly left me feeling very, very unhappy. To write and evoke such emotions from all, I guess means you are very good at what you do.

  • Nick Kenney on Apr 27, 2008

    Thank you Dawn and Francie. I’m trying to get people to stop and think… if I made you sad and cry then I did my job. Many thanks!

  • Judy Sheldon on May 1, 2008

    Nick you have done it again, beautifully. You have such a knack for stirring emotions.

  • Nick Kenney on May 1, 2008

    Thank you Judy! This one touched my heart while I wrote it.
    I’m very proud of this one.

  • P.R. Mace on May 5, 2008

    Another great story. I hate to see lost dogs running the streets. I wish I could save everyone of them. I also believe that dogs have a heaven. My eyes were filled with tears by the end.

  • Nick Kenney on May 6, 2008

    Thanks so much P.R.!

  • tracy sardelli on May 6, 2008

    i am truly at a loss for words, whatever i say won’t do this story justice, all i can say is well done on another brilliant one.

  • Nick Kenney on May 6, 2008

    Thank you Tracy! I am truly honored!

  • M.C. Johnson on May 7, 2008

    We should make a day of silence for the animals that die on the streets every day.

  • Nick Kenney on May 7, 2008

    I agree M.C. Instead of letting them lay there to rot…
    We’d consider it absurd to do that to a human corpse yet man’s best friend…

  • shanna on May 16, 2008

    you took the words right out of my heart…..
    i still remember the dog i met on my way to school…
    how often i wondered ……..where it will end up….
    i couldn’t sleep for week, those mournful eyes looking deep into mine, searching….
    for something that i couldn’t give…

  • Nick Kenney on May 20, 2008

    It breaks my heart everyday, Shanna, I see dogs roaming the countryside homeless and starving…people are cruel to them…I want to take every one of them home with me…

  • PR Mace on Jun 6, 2008

    Hey Nick,

    Just wanted to read this sad, wonderful story again.

  • PR Mace on Sep 10, 2008

    Hi Nick,

    Just revisiting some of my favorites.

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