That’s an interactive story, pick one of the choices below and write it at your comment. The story will continue on the way of the most picked choice by the readers…

(It’s an interactive story, there are three choices at the end of the story. You need to select a choice between A, B and C. And write it at your comment.)

(It’s a story set in a fantasy world. There was a huge kingdom called ‘Lufon‘. The king of Lufon was Fonar, his wife the queen was Enayla. Their three sons; from the eldest to youngest; Fonlar, Luntar and Anfar II. In the north of Lufon, there was a vile tribe of Aluugans. They have been beaten by King Fonar for a several times, but still they haven’t gave up. Aluugans attacked again. This time it was a more organized and a bigger attack. To stop Aluugans, King Fonar marched his army towards the north, taking his two sons, Fonlar and Luntar, with him.)

Flames, smoke and screams…. It was midnight and the whole palace was in flames. Anfar II rose up to his feet and opened the door of his private room. The palace servants were running around, there were a few soldier corpses at the corner. Anfar closed the door and tried to anticipate what was going on. His thoughts drilled by a sudden knock at the door. ‘Prince Anfar! Prince Anfar!‘ shouted someone. Anfar recognized the voice. It was his swordmaster and mentor, Ragalyom. Anfar’s trust to his mentor made him open the door. Ragalyom slipped into the room and closed the door heavily. Anfar hold Ragalyom’s arms and cried, ‘What’s going on master?!! Tell me!‘. Ragalyom answered quickly, ‘Your mother! The queen.. She let Tarul troops sneak into the palace via palace’s secret dungeon tunnels!..She..Forgive me i say this, but she..Betrayed us milord!‘ Anfar pushed his master to the door angrily. He gazed at Ragalyom’s eyes and shouted with cold-blooded words, ‘My mother would never betray my father! You must be the betrayer for telling these lies or someone has tricked you!!!’. Ragalyom opened his mouth to answer but angry Anfar pushed him out of the way with a heavy thrust and opened the door. Ragalyom hold his arm and tried to stop him, he cried, ‘Milord! No! Please no! You got to believe me! For Lufon’s sake believe me!‘ But Anfar did not listen to his mentor’s words. He raced to his mother’s, Queen Enayla’s chamber. Ragalyom ran after him.

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  • Allison Jae on Jan 29, 2011

    Great story so far, very intense and full of actions. I choose A. Great idea, by the way.

  • Pete Macinta on Jan 29, 2011

    B

    This is a very good idea–an interactve story.

  • CHIPMUNK on Jan 30, 2011

    great share

  • jemialbert on Jan 30, 2011

    nice share

  • sunnykumar786 on Jan 30, 2011

    nice post

    SK

  • Omer Said on Jan 30, 2011

    Thanks folks, but you need to select one of the choices at the end. A, B or C? :)

  • Doranze on Feb 5, 2011

    erm choice A looks the wisest imo

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