Invaders-(A halo-like story by me) is story I wrote a few years ago on a bored weekend. It is not done yet though so give me some Suggestions if I should finish it. I will take any type of suggestions on what to add. This story is extremly like the halo book series. They inspired me.

Disclaimer: I dont own any of the Halo Series or Books. This is just a story I made that is extremly similar to the halo book series (the books inspired me to write this)

INVADERS 
 
CH.1 
 
0500 hours 
July 2nd, 2052 
Alpha base 
 
(static in background) “warhawk to knife seven, do you read?” 
“this is knife seven, what so you need?” 
 
“there….seems to be a black hole about 47 kilometers to the west.” 
 
“describe it in detail please” 
 
“well….its black…..round…..and it Is sucking objects into it sir” 
 
“hm..I’ll contact alpha base captain” 
 
“knife seven to alpha base captain 
, there is an emergency clasiffied as an uknoun force of nature” 
 
“This is the captain, and boy if you are messing with me your in big trouble. In other words what is wrong? Does it look like a threat? Or just just somthing we can ignore?” 
 
“well it it sucking things into it and it is like a huge tornado on steroids, so yes its a threat.” 
 
“give me its location son, so I can imvestigate.” 
 
(more static) “help!help! There eating our brains!!!, help!” 
 
“this is alpha base captain, Who needs help and what I’d happening?!” 
 
“I….I don’t know theres little blobs brown things triing to eat us sir!, send an EVAC team and get some help over here!” 
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CH. 2 
 
0600 houres 
June 2nd ,2052 
Alpha base 
 
“this is alpha base catain, everyone evacuate to battle ship two! Hurry! There seems to be an invasion!” 
 
“alpha captain to aplpha base four, were sending an EVAC team your way,help will arive in exacly four minutes, hold out until you can” 
 
(gunfire and static in background) “they better hurry! It getting to hot here, they are killing us one by one and there is bigger ones too!” 
 
(EVAC team leader) “ok men lock and load, i can’t say what you will be seeing and how you can fite it…but you guys are trained for this kindof mission so here is is!” 
 
(EVAC team all together) “Sir yes sir!” 
 
“oh crap when will the EVAC team arive, were getting low on ammo and need help!” 
Then a huge alien bashes a marine to the ground and beats him with a crate and goes after the rest of the Dazed men and hits them all with its arm and slices one almost in half with shear power. 
 
“Oh crap! I think we will need spartans!” 
Then the aliens hits the man in the chest and crushes his skull with his fist. 
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CH.3 
 
0100 hours 
June 4, 2052 
Spartan headqarters 
 
Rob was checking all his armor and his bags just like daily rutine for any Spartan. Then he got a call on the COMM(Comunicator) about the black hole and alpha base four and the possible aliens. The capain told him to get his men and report to alpha base four. the EVAC team could not handle them, so they needed some help. 
 
“Rob, do you think these attackers are the same old coveanant or something unouwn, no regular covenant creature can bash a mans skull like that” fred asked 
 
“I don’t know, but i do know that we got to go there and give em hell” Rob replied 
 
(Rob to team) 
“Prep in 5 minutes! Check your ammo, bags, food, anything you need for a weeks mission. We will get fresh supplies at battle ship two after we find out what’s going on and execute it.” 
 
“don’t worry about all your unnessisary stuff, we will come back, and if you get hurt call me or any team members on the COMM, you know the drill, now move! 
 
(five minutes later) 
 
Everyone hurries on the standard A7 tranportation ship and got ready. 
 
“It’l be a bumpy ride, throwup can is by the door. We will be arriving in an hour. Don’t do anything stupid on my ship or your dead,I mean it. The ship captain said 
 
“listen to him and respect it, and John strap that seatbelt or you won’t live to see the mission.” Rob said 
 
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CH. 4 
0300 houres 
June 4, 2052 
Ariving at mission 
 
“Go, go, go! Stay in your three man teams. If for any reason you get split up, or lost just click your locator button so we can find you and get you back.” Rob said to his Spartans 
 
Never before did Rob have to treat his men and women like babies. Spartans are exspected to already know the drill and their duties but this is differnt, they are going after an unouwn team of creatures. So Rob has to go over everything one more time and make sure the Spartans know what’s going on. 
  Rob sent team one, two and seven out into the mission. They were the most respected and most skillful. Rob and his team were team one and it made up of Rob, being the leader, Fred being Co-leader and also Robs best friend. There was Geace who liked to show off her sniping skills and Steve who was a profesinal soldier just like the rest of the team, also a little shy and didnt talk much. In all there are ten teams and fifty Spartans all together. Spartans are tough able to handle the hardest missions. Rob was given leader of the Spartans ever since the completion of Spartan training, he was one of the best Spartans. But he’s not known for his skill, he’s known for his leadership, he has always kept his cool and acted like everything was fine and in control, even in the hardest of missions where there were one out of a hundred kind of odds,Rob has never failed in a mission. 
  The other team are regular groups of Spartans with the same skill as team one. Rob ran all teams. The reason he picked teams one, two, and seven is because he thinks those three teams are the best ones for missions like these and also the three best teams with the most loyalty and respect to him. Rob does not treat the other teams differnt in any other way, he always showed respect for his Spartans and his teams. 
 
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Ch. 5 
0300 houres 
June 4, 2052 
 
Rob and his teams went to the base outside fenceses looked around and noticed there was no black hole. 
 
“team two cover the south side, don’t enter any buildings until told so. Team seven cover west side, and my team come with me. 
 
“where could they be? Its like a ghost town here.”fred asked 
 
“they must be in the buildings and grouped up” rob said 
 
“all clear sir, no contact with enemy troops” team two leader said 
 
“same here” team seven leader said” 
 
Rob got out his map and told the two teams what buildings to enter and what to do. 
 
“follow me, when we enter the building look for enemy troops and possible surviving marines” Rob said 
 
“Fire in the hole!” Steve said as he threw in a flash grenade. 
 
They all enterd the building as quite and as fast as possible. The other two teams said all clear and Rob took his team further. 
  Then all if a sudden a huge brute-like creature jump on fred and tried to suffercate him. Rob drew fire on the aliens back and one of the bullets his Freds torso. Fred then took advantage of the aliens weekness and gave a three round burst into its skull. 
 
“aw crap! This thing stinks! And lookit the blood it has, light brown with red and yellow streaks”Fred said 
 
“This thing is odd it looks like a brute coverd in yellow slime and mold” 
 
Then growles were heard and Rob orderd his team to stay put and be aware of there surroundings 
 
“what was that? It sounded like a drunk dog” grace said 
 
“I’m pretty sure its another one of these things, they seem to use there body as a weapon. For all we know they might not use guns”rob said 
  That was then not true as one of the creatures fired poorly aimed shots at Rob. Grace fired a blast from her sniper rifle into its head and it fell down. 
 
“follow me” Rob said 
 
“Oh my god! It looked like a marine!” 
 
The thing had standard Marine camo pants and a shirt with “Marine” printed onto it. It looked Like a zombie in human form, it even had a dog-tag on it.Steve looked at it. 
 
“James Berant, Member number 9240″ 
 
“It seems to be a zombie that took a marines body and used it as its own” Steve said. 
 
“that explaines the yellow blobs the captain was talking about, and how it goes to their Brain and eats it and takes the body over acting as the brain.”Rob said 
 
“could you imagine if those things took over our body, it would be a Zombie Spartan.” Grace said 
 
“Well let’s not let that happen and keep moving”Fred said 
  They walked past a long hallway only to see dead marine bodies and zombie bodies spread out in the rooms. 
 
“Man, where ar…….” 
 
Then before Grace could finish her sentence a zombie thing hit her in the arm with an smg and then went to hit her in the back when Rob shot it in the chest once and Steve finished the job. 
 
“they must like to travle by themselves and they are stupid enough to fite something they could never win”Rob said. 
 
Then they stumbled on a group of 15 of them and Grace went to work with her sniper while the rest shot them with Battle rifles and assult rifles. 
 
“Fire in the hole” 
 
A grenade bounced off the wall and right onto five of the zombies blasting them to bits. 
 
“hold on guys, I’ll check on team two and seven” 
  Rob clicked the COMM 
“Teams two and seven what’s your statis” 
 
“All clear, but alot of weird stuff is going on”Team seven said 
 
“Same here, these things have Human and alien bodies in Zombie form”Team two said 
 
“ok well keep moving, we will all meet in the central building in 0500 houres”Rob said 
 
“hello who’s there? Help! I’m over here under the pipe” A marine said 
 
Rob lifted up the pipe and the marine sliped out. 
  “Its nice to see you Chief” (Marines refer to Rob as Chief because that’s his real rank among the Spartans. 
 
“the last two days have been horrifiing they have been eating us and turning us into them, I am only here because I was hiding under that pipe” The marine said 
 
“they outnumberd us thousands to a few hundred, we could only take on so many and the EVAC team fled after they saw us getting eaten”he said again 
 
“Steve, tend to his wounds and have his follow us and make sure he doesn’t get hurt.He might be a part of our whole mission”The Chief (rob) said. 
  Steve wiped off the blood on the marines arm and wraped it with a cloth,then he gave him his Shotgun. And the cheif gave him his magmum. 
  “Lets get moving, we need the go to the central building” 
  Rob and his team got up to the central building doors.The central building is like the Alpha base headquarters for that unit.Then the other two teams got there under twenty seconds later. The Spartans were trained to have good timing. 
  Rob peeked through a window and saw around two hundred zombies and around twenty marines locked up. 
  “It looks like they are turning the humans into Zombies.”Rob said 
 
  “We need to help them,some of them might be my friends”The marine said 
 
  “We can try but they will most likely have them killed before we get to them”Rob said 
  The Spartans can kill hundreds to thousands of enemies with teamwork and some heavy equiptment.they can also carry about five to six weapons each Spartan. 
  Grace grabed her sniper and climbed to the top of the building and proper herself onto a ledge. Rob and Fred loaded their Rocket launchers and Steve got some grenades and put them on a line to set up a decent bomb. 
 
—————- 
 
CH. 6 
0500 houres 
June 4, 2052 
Alpha base central building 
 
Steve set up the grenades to go off five seconds after the other and let the line go. Rob told Fred to shoot at the right side of the building while he shot at the left side. Grace started sniping the ones around the Marines so they can stay alive. Within seconds around a hundred of the Zombies got blown up and the whole team instead off Grace went down for the rest of the close-qwarters work. The other two teams joined in. 
  Fred shot five of them in the head with three round bursts of his Battle rifle.Rob primed two grenades and threw them into two groupes. Ten of the zombies ambushed team two and knocked out one of the Spartans with its fist. Team seven helped them out and took the Spartan to a safe spot. Robs team realized there might be a sudden ambush and were about to go to the other teams when thirty zombies attacked them, five of them carried around assult rifles wile the others used there body as a weapon. One of them had a had a rocket launcher and fired it at fred. 
 
“oh crap!” fred said as he lunged for cover. The rocket hit the ground beside him but managed to throw him a few few feet to the side. 
 
“Fred!” The cheif said and he and Steve ran up to him while shooting back. Grace moved her fire away from the traped marines and fired at the zombies attacking Steve And Rob to keep them cover while they took fred to a safe spot and had him fixed up until he got to a doctor. The Spartan at team two woke up and forgot everything about that mission,his team made him remember what’s going on. 
 
“I’m almost out of ammo, I can only shoot so many” Grace said 
  Someone on team seven gave her some extra clips of sniper ammo and gave Rob and Steve some battle rifle ammo. 
 
  “Thanks” she said and she took out the empty clip and put in a new one. 
 
  “team seven split off from team two and go get those marines out of those holding cells and get them to cover by team two.”Rob said 
  “only a few more to go”Rob said 
 
  Then a group of zombies came after team two with energy swords and smg’s. Grace killed one of the zombies and the other managed to hit a Spartan on team two with its sword.then after that a Spartan in team seven got hit with an smg in the back. 
 
  “team two and seven kill those zombies and group up over here after you get those marines out of the cells”Rob said 
  When all the Spartans were in a group, and still alert the cheif was about to contact the A7 transportation ship,known as a pelican. 
  Rob got ready to talk on the COMM”Spartan Cheif to pelican captain warhawk,get us out of here and bring us to battle ship two” 
  “you finished already? Man you Spartans are what rumers say, damn fast furious. Good work, I’ll be there in ten minutes.” The pelican captain said. 
 
  ( Ten minutes later ) 
 
  “Ok boys, get on and strap up. Lay your wounded in the tubes…….ewww I forgot there might be marines to come on the way back,it’l be a tight fit that’s all.this bird can hold up to fourty people and its limit on the lable sais twenty-five.”The pelican captain said. 
  Robs team munched on their food on the trip back and the other teams did too. 
 
  “Hey captain,want some?”a Spartan said. 
 
  “no, all I need is my cigaretes and I’m set for life.” 
  The Spartans have never even tried cigararets in their lives, in Spartan training they were taught what cigarets can do and they were taught to ovoid them. As loyal as the Spartans are none of them has ever laid a finger on one if they wanted to stay healthy. And yes,they have wonderd why they are so addicting and why people had them so much. 
  When they arive at Battle ship two they were greeted by marines and doctors. The wounded got help from the doctors and all the teams could do was sit and wait. 
 
  “So Doc, tell us how many killed.”Rob said. 
  That was a joke the Spartans tell to the doctors because Spartans never really die to often. 
 
  “well……um…..No deaths…..”The doctor said. 
  The Spartans laughed. 
“its a joke” the chief said laughing. 
 
  “oh…….well Fred has two broken Ribs, a broken femer, and a few fracterd fingers,the Spartan on team seven got sliced by the sword four inches deep, and the last Spartan just has a few bullet wounds” 
  The doctor realized it was ok to joke around and said 
  “oh, and the guy who got knocked out is suffering a major headache and remembers nothing he will be getting help from the people in white coats” 
  Everyone laughed and asked how long till the Spartans are going to be back in fiting shape. 
  “Well…they should be able to fight in around three or four days.”The doctor said. 
  In the year of 2052 Medical technology has increased massivly and been upgraded, theres even been cures for cancer, diabetes and other major diseses. Its been a great revolution in the last fifty years. Robots have been put in peoples houses, a pizza takes twenty seconds to make, and scientist are on the edge of discovering magic, or atleast they think so. 
  “ok well get Fred fixed up first, because we have a meeting in around half an hour and he needs to be there. 
 
  (twenty minutes later) 
 
  “Chief,this is the captain. Meet me in the ships headquarters and make sure all of Spartan team one is here too.” 
 
“Copy that”Rob said 
 
  The doctor put Fred in a portible bed and wheeled him to the headquarters.The rest of the team followed the doctor. 
  “We are all here” Rob said 
 
  Everyone exchanges Salutes but Fres can barely lift his arm to salute. 
 
  “Relax Son, its ok to not salute if it kills you to do it” The captain said 
  “you must be comftorble in that bed,looks like you’ve got it made”Captain said 
 
  “oh Belive me, your more comftorble then me, I can’t move a muscle more then a foot.”Fred said 
 
  “Relax son, you can use some relaxing”the captain said. 
 
  “Ok, the Admiral and some more officers will arive shortly”The captain said 
 
  Within a minute the admiral and some of the board officers enterd the room and seeted in there fancy chairs. More salutes were given. 
 
  “Ok, let’s cut the crap and get straight to buisness. We ain’t got much time.” The admiral said 
 
  “So these so called zombies have attacked us and we have no clue why, or how they work. So far we know they take control of humans and other alien bodies. We got evidence supporting that they are agaisnt the covenant because we have seen zombie elites and grunts running around. That can be good or bad, most likely good because we will have some indirect help from the covenant. And the covenant havnt attacked us in a while so they might be nuetral with us until these zombies are destroyed and they stop infecting us, anyone else have anything to say? The admiral said. 
 
  “these things must travle throught a black hole/vortex to get here. One of my pelicans spotted a black hole vortex thingy right before the zombies attacked. So I was thinking, Mabey we can weaken them by planting bombs under those vortexes and when they touch the ground…..BOOM! They get blown up, that’s just to slow them down” The captain said 
 
  “hell, if we had the time we could do that. But we could put bombs around all bases so if a black hole appers we evacuate all the marines and personel. Then we use the cameras to see when they touch down…..you get the point, it just may work. We need anything we can get to stop these things” The admiral said. 
 
  “Sir, I can get all ten of my teams in to plant the bombs, we could finishes a base in five minutes each”Rob said 
 
  “too risky” The admiral said 
  “those black holes are massive and suck up anything not tied down, if you Spartans are in the area then you would be in the zombie world and killed, or you could kill a thousand of the things while in thier world….but that’s not the point, we could never get you out and we need you guys here. I could just contact each base and have them send half their bombs in the area, tie them down tight and get them ready to blow when trigerd.” The admiral said 
 
  “but thanks for trying to help”The admiral said. 
 
  “Ok next subject” the admiral said 
 
  “we have news that the covenat are splitting up into two….let’s call them parties. The Elites are septerating from the prohets because the prophets want to activate the ring. The ring is a huge weapon that can wipe out all humans, aliens, and zombies. The one thing it doesn’t kill is robots, and it was made by robots centries ago. The prhpets think that it only kills all humans so they want to activate it. But the Elites know better so they are trying to stop them at all costs. The elites are teamed with the grunts. The prophets are teamed with the brutes. And by the way, the prophets are only a group of aliens kind of like our admirals,captains,genrals….ECT. There are only about fifteen prophets so the brutes do all the dirty work. Our theriy Is that if we team with the elites and grunts we could win this everlasting war. We could kill the infection and destroy the rings so they don’t kill us. Then the elites and us can return to our home worlds and chill out until theres a new threat.” The admiral said 
 
  “but how would we make the elites think to team with us, we can’t email them, can’t phone them…Or anything the only way to contact them is to go ten feet away from them and ask them. And who knows by the time we tell them they could have blown us to bits thinking we would attack them, theres got to be another way.” The captain said 
 
  “no there doesn’t” the Cheif said 
  “We can aproach them with guys who look important and that look like they dont want to fight. Then those brave men could ask them and see what they say. If that doesn’t work we can have snipers from far away that they can’t see. And if they try to kill the guys the snipers can make short work of em. We would use around fifty snipers, some Spartan snipers and marine snipers. They would be safe with fifty snipers guarding them” Rob said. 
 
  “I was thinking around the same thing as you, we must think alike since we are both leaders of people, we could think about using that plan, in the mean time get some rest we will need you early tommorow, and if the plan is accepted we would put it to work in about a week” The admiral said. 
 
  The Spartans walked to their assigned sleep spots and Rob took Fred back to the doctor, it turns out Fred fell asleep halfway into the meeting. The cheif will update him later. 
 
  “hmm….theres some cards here, and 
A Basketball hoop.” Grace said 
 
  “That will be fine for about a week, we will most likely be walking around and sleeping our way through the week anyway”Steve said. 
  They both said goodnight and a few minutes later Rob walked in and went to bed too. Its been a long day and they need the rest. 
 
—————- 
CH. 7 
0100 hours 
June 6, 2052 
Abaord alien flagship (Capital ship) 
 
  “What will we do?”General Smish said. 
 
  “Sir, the flood are taking over one of our Crusiers”An elite said. 
 
  “man I hate the flood, taking over our bodies for no reason. They are an infection that needs to be cleaned.” The elite general said. 
 
  “Yea, we have drove them away a few times, but this time they are outnumbering us and they are smarter. They can now use guns, which they nerver used to be able to. I heard they are attacking the humans too, the humans have no clue what they are. inleaste we have some battle exsperiance with the flood.” 
 
  “and the prophets are making it worse, going after the ring that will kill us all. They need to be taught a lesson.” Captain vein said. 
 
  “Ive been thinking, Mabey we could team up with the humans and kill the prophets and the flood. We could kill the floods massive organism and after that we could just part away from the humans and stay home until a next attack”The general said 
 
  “Sir, the flood has taken over another battle ship” The elite messenger said. 
 
  “Ok then, let’s do it” The general said. 
 
CH. 8 
0300 hours 
June 6, 2052 
Aboard Battle ship two. 
 
  “Cheif, this is the admiral. We are going to use your treaty plan. The one with the fifty snipers, blah blah blah. In three days we will be doing it. You will take your Spartan snipers and bring them on the mission. Oh, and you, me and the captain will be walking over to the elites to try to make the treaty. We will bring lots of deplyable sheilds incase they say no and try to blow our heads off.So be in the ships headquarters in three days, start getting ready now. 
 
  Rob told this to every Spartan he had and they all agreed. Rob told his snipers to get ready and make sure their sniper rifles are in perfect shape and that its sighted perfectly. 
 
  (Three days later) 
 
  “Cheif, were ready for you. This is going to be a helluva mission” The Captain said. 
 
  “Ok Spartans! Lock and load! Make last minute preporations and get ready for the weirdest mission ull be seeing in a long time” The cheif said 
  “I want it done thirty seconds ago! Move Move Move!” 
 
  The chief took his sniper team and met up at the headquarters. The fifty snipers used two pelicans and Rob and the officers took a separate pelican for a mini meeting on how to walk there and if needed, how to deploy the sheilds. 
 
  “you know the drill, we will arivve at the covenant base is two hours” The pelican captain said. 
  When they arrived at the covenant base they had a flag showwing they won’t be fighting so the alien ships let them land. 
  The other two pelicans landed a qwarter of a mile to the south of the planet. The snipers all took postion. 
 
  “What Is going on?” Captain vein asked. 
  “Shh, the humans are signaling something” General Smish replied. 
  “Follow me, were gana go see what they need.” The general said. 
 
  The Elite general and his fifteen bodyguards walked halfway up to the Cheif and the officers.then all of a sudden a huge group of brutes attacked the Chief and the officers. 
  “Take cover!, go to the pelican!” The cheif said. 
  The cheif droped some sheilds and got his battle rifle loaded up. 
  “These damn brutes are getting what they asked for” The cheif wisperd to himself while he shot one in the neck and hit it down with his leg. He snapped its neck and went for the next. 
 
  “everyone! Shoot the brutes!” Grace said 
  The Spartans and the marines all aimed after the heads and let the rounds pass through. One of the underskilled marines almost hit an elite officer. That would have costed the mission, and the young marine would have all his ranks and medels taken away. 
  A brute grabed the cheif and flung him five feet. Then it grabbed his gun arm and tried to wressle it free. The chief fired and a round went into the brutes veins. Blood flew out, the brute tried to keep it in. Then the cheif kicked it in the neck and the brute fell down to be killed by Graces sniper rifle. 
 
  “Help the humans! The elite general said. 
  Five of the elite bodyguards ran after the brutes and fired with there plasma rifles like demons from hell. 
  The brutes are strong, they are like gorilas. The cheif can take them on in hand to hand combat because he has very strong armor. All Spartans have it and they also got stronger with scientific chemicals in Spartan training camp. The chemicals alterd the Spartans DNA and made them fight like they had steroids. That’s why Spartans are such good fighters and never lose missions. 
  “Five more to go, shoot the heads” Grace said 
  The brutes can take multiple shots in the head so it takes long to kill them. 
  Then all the brutes were all dead and the cheif told the Admiral and The Captain its safe to come out. 
 
  “thanks”The cheif said to the elite bodyguards. 
  The elites said something back and Robs helmet made the elites language turn into the humans language 
  “Follow us” The elites said. 
  “He said to follow him” The cheif told the officers. 
  They made there way to the elite general and told him the plan. 
 
  “We have been thinking the same thing” The general said. 
  “Ok then, we will team up and have fictory!” The elite General said. 
 
  “Its so differnt” Rob said. 
  “ussallly we’d be trying to rip each others heads off” Rob said. 
 
  Rob signaled the snipers to put thier guns away and come. 
 
  “Here are some of our best snipers” Rob said. 
  The Spartans and marines sniper saluted and got the salute in return. 
  “I seen them snipe from far away, very nice acuracy, but one almost hit one of my men.” The General said. 
 
  “Th……That w…..was me” One of the marines said. He was shaking hoping the elite wouldn’t do anything to him. 
 
  “Its alright” The general replied. 
  “here, this is the wrong place to talk” The general said. 
  The general lead to men to a meeting spot. 
  “0k, we will set up some ships on your planet and set up some bases.” 
  “don’t mean to interupt, but what are those zombie things that have been attacking us?” The Admiral said 
  “Oh, you mean the flood? They have terrorized our young ones and eaten us. We have made the damn things go away but they still come back every now and then” 
 
  “Is there a way to stop them? 
 
  “Yes, we could go to thier planet and destroy the huge organism they come from”The general said. 
 
  “Well let’s talk about how to stop the prophets” The General said. 
 
  “The planet we need to go to is not far from here. Its about fifty mini planets away. What we would need to do is go there. Kill the brutes then kill the prophets. Well we don’t need to kill all the brutes, just enough to get to the prophets. We have maps of all the building structers they have, we used to live there once. I don’t know how much has changed but stuff really never changed when we were there. This won’t be easy, we will be going against all the brutes. They are tough and theres going to be alot of em.But we can power through like they never thought.” The general said with confidence. 
 
  “Ok, we will need about five hundred marines and a few Spartan teams. We will be bring tanks and warthogs ( a warthog is like a jeep that has a 50 caliber machine gun mounted on the back, a driver, and a seat on the side for an extra person. There is also another type of warthog that has no gunner but can fit three people on the back, it is mainly for transportation.) we can bring some monguses.”( four wheeler that can hold two people) you guys can bring what you need.” The admiral said. 
 
  “Sir, on this long of a mission my Spartans would need atleast one hundred thousand shells of battle rifle, five hundred rocket launcher shells, one thousand sniper 50 cal shells and about eight hundred fragmentation grenades” Rob said. 
  “Oh, and that’s for all of my Spartans. Not just my team.” 
  “Granted” The admiral replied. 
 
  “ok, we will start the mission in about two weeks,thers gana be alot of preporations before we start.”The elite General said. 
 
CH. 9 
1200 hours 
June 7, 2052 
Spartan Sleeping qwarters. 
 
  “goodnight guys” Rob said. 
 
  “Hey guys, remember when we were in Spartan training and our instructor was about to put us on a mission. Then we ditched him. Steve said 
 
  “Oh yea, then we stole his underwater tanks and hid in the lake for a week.”Rob said 
 
  “Man, lopez was pissed when he found us. But we had fun” Grace said 
 
  “Hahahaaha, Goodnight guys” Steve said. 
  (Two weeks later) 
 
  The Spartans got ready and met up at the headquarters. All the marines and Spartans flew up to the elite planet with two huge battle ship 

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  • Jim on Nov 19, 2009

    Wow! this was a good story. I’m guessing your on the younger side when you mad it because of some of the mispelled words, and you also just sound young for a reason.

    But thats not the point this is a good story from what it is now. I think you should keep going.

    There were times where I was so into it. Good Work

  • Roborob711 on Jan 8, 2011

    thank you!I wrote this one day when I had the flu when I was like 12.

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