Invaders-(A halo-like story by me) is story I wrote a few years ago on a bored weekend. It is not done yet though so give me some Suggestions if I should finish it. I will take any type of suggestions on what to add. This story is extremly like the halo book series. They inspired me.

Disclaimer: I dont own any of the Halo Series or Books. This is just a story I made that is extremly similar to the halo book series (the books inspired me to write this)

THIS IS WHERE I STOPED, DO YOU THINK I SHOULD CONTINUE? IF YES PLEASE TELL ME AND GIVE A SUGGESTION OR 2 WHILE YOUR AT IT.
 
 

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  • Jim on Nov 19, 2009

    Wow! this was a good story. I’m guessing your on the younger side when you mad it because of some of the mispelled words, and you also just sound young for a reason.

    But thats not the point this is a good story from what it is now. I think you should keep going.

    There were times where I was so into it. Good Work

  • Roborob711 on Jan 8, 2011

    thank you!I wrote this one day when I had the flu when I was like 12.

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