One of the greatest challenges couples face in today’s world, is that of career advancement, leading to absent husbands or wives. This might lead to infidelity, not to mention death. This article is a fictional one, with a story about a very successful couple, the wife being an absent one, as a roving director of a massive law firm.

George and Nancy were happily married, way back in 1998. They had what was dubbed the wedding of the year in mid December 1998.

An accountant by profession, George had his own audit firm at an up-market neighborhood in Nairobi, the capital city of Kenya. Nancy, a lawyer, had her own practice at another up-market area of Nairobi. They appeared to be doing well by all standards.

Come the year 2004, Nancy started an aggressive expansion program that saw her opening branches of her law firm in a number of towns in Kenya. By the year 2006, she had opened branches in Kisumu and Mombasa cities, Thika, Nyeri, Kitale and Kericho. Each branch had 9 employees. Business was excellent.

She became a roving director, visiting her different branches from time to time. Together with her husband, they bought a townhouse in the up-market area of Lavington, Nairobi, near her firm’s offices, at a cost of US$400,000.00. That was no mean achievement for a couple aged 38 and 35 respectively for George and Nancy.

George, on his part, was a hands-on auditor, who did the actual work himself, along with his two partners. Owing to the volume of work, he could carry work home, and sometimes work on weekends.

Due to Nancy’s numerous absences, she decided to call her youngest sister, Vivian, to join them at their house, so as to help with the house-work. Vivian had just completed her high school education.

One day, in mid March 2008, thanks to Facebook, Imelda, George’s old college-mate, reunited with him. She wanted help in setting up her books for her salon and boutique business in Nairobi.

George took up the assignment himself. They had a series of meetings, whereby she guided Imelda on the books of initial entries, among other things.

By July 2008, Imelda’s accounting system was up and running. One evening in September 2008, Imelda called George at 4.00pm, citing a problem with her accounting system. George went over to Imelda’s office and sorted out the problem. Imelda requested George to drop her home, since her car was in the garage. George obliged.

It was a 30-minute drive. Imelda took this opportunity to openly and tearfully share her frustrations, mainly with her landlord, as well as with her siblings, who were unwilling to share with her her late Dad’s inheritance upon his passing on.

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  • BluSphere on Sep 29, 2010

    Nice share, friend.

    Best regards,
    Blu

  • Heather Dawn on Sep 29, 2010

    Didn’t see the ending coming. Great story.

  • GodsGrace on Sep 29, 2010

    Nice Share

  • jaideepkhanduja on Sep 30, 2010

    nice post :)

  • weepingwillow on Oct 4, 2010

    I was reading the first page, but I was already excited to get to the next page. Interesting. Enjoyed it!

  • Belinda Dobie on Oct 4, 2010

    An interesting story.

  • Boxervaibhav on Oct 4, 2010

    Very nice…:)

  • R.Laws on Oct 4, 2010

    A kiss ended in death! I think it would not happen if the husband remained faithful to her wife.

  • R.Laws on Oct 4, 2010

    Oh, sorry for the error. :-(
    I mean “his” wife ( not “her”)

  • Pаtsy Collins on Oct 4, 2010

    Interesting article.

  • Yalonda on Oct 4, 2010

    Interesting story!

  • cecildeguzman on Oct 4, 2010

    very gtragic, but can happen in real life. thanks for sharing

  • Ukrainian on Oct 5, 2010

    It\’s an amazing story!

  • Stan Wilson on Oct 5, 2010

    wow this is a fantastic write…its a pity you couldnt carry it on…..have a look at my “mountain of love” poem/story read it from chapter 1 to chapter 50,,,I’m working on the sequence to it at the moment…but it could give you and idea on how to continue with what you have started here…..I couldnt help but wanting this story of yours to continue…thanks for sharing although I’m left wanting to know whats going to happen next???

  • Will Dee on Oct 5, 2010

    Nice and interesting read. I like the way you built up the story. It was easy to read and nice switch at the end.

  • Beth Suess on Oct 5, 2010

    very nice piece!

  • westgi on Oct 6, 2010

    Interestingly, very nice article! Thanks for visiting!

  • westgi on Oct 6, 2010

    Interestingly, very nice article! Thanks for visiting! gigi

  • mykseverino88 on Oct 7, 2010

    great story though it’s a sad ending..

  • jammaekas on Oct 13, 2010

    interesting…and this might happen in reality if couples will fail on how to balance everything in their lives.

  • Carol M Creasey on Oct 14, 2010

    very nice, thanks

  • ishinimrod on Oct 15, 2010

    Nice share my friend.

    You’ve made a great piece!

    Sincerely Yours,

    Ishinimrod
    Signed

  • Chris Stonecipher on Oct 15, 2010

    Your article is well written my friend and enjoyable to read. I am looking forward to reading more. Thanks for accepting my friend request.

  • Jane Campbell on Oct 18, 2010

    lovely story!! thanks..

  • Jenny Heart on Oct 18, 2010

    Great one!

  • WebScribe on Oct 18, 2010

    Wouldn’t it be wonderful if someone about to get into just such a disastrous affair, happened to read your all-too-true-to-life story, and gained enough foresight to avoid the tragedy? Your story could save someone’s marriage, or (as in the story) even someone’s life! What a worthwhile effort, which may have many wonderful consequences! Great job!

  • WebScribe on Oct 18, 2010

    Wouldn’t it be wonderful if someone about to get into just such a disastrous affair, happened to read your all-too-true-to-life story, and gained enough foresight to avoid the tragedy? Your story could save someone\’s marriage, or (as in the story) even someone\’s life! What a worthwhile effort, which may have many wonderful consequences! Great job!

  • shelpeare on Oct 18, 2010

    A well-written true-to-life story. Looks like that kiss was the kiss of death.

  • ledger747 on Oct 27, 2010

    New type of article, I liked it!

  • alvinwriter on Oct 28, 2010

    Tragic story, but riveting!

  • BRENDAKSHELTON on Nov 5, 2010

    Hey that was great! Really enjoyed the story, Thanks.

  • treasures306 on Nov 30, 2010

    It is always a shame hear of a tragedy like this even though this was a hypothetical scenario, this happens far too often in real life. If only they could think ahead of the possible or probable outcomes it might serve as a deterrent in entering a situation like that. Ahhh, if only we could see into the future, how many things would we do differently :) Great story.

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