Comments on: It Only Gets Weird

By: leggy

leggy — Wed, 27 May 2009 08:32:00 +0000

sorry read it*

By: leggy

leggy — Wed, 27 May 2009 08:31:04 +0000

i loved this story,,ts past my bedtime but i stayed up ndwatched it.

By: Beulah!

Beulah! — Fri, 15 May 2009 14:33:39 +0000

This is a beautiful story..i was blown away with it. Continuation please?….lol

By: Flourishingflorida

Flourishingflorida — Fri, 15 May 2009 12:59:12 +0000

sorry abt dat kk. it’s d problem of either d publisher or d internet provider. Getting it sorted out now. Thanks 4 bringing it 2 my notice

By: kk

kk — Fri, 15 May 2009 00:51:30 +0000

I totally agree with AJ about your writing, however for constructive purposes,I think it would flow much better if you divide your story into paragraphs. As it is right now, it appears to be flowing endlessly and the ideas in the story can get a bit broken. Love your work!

By: AJ

AJ — Tue, 12 May 2009 20:00:22 +0000

You write beautifully, you probably hear that a lot…but you engage your reader and paint such a vivid picture…I wish you good luck in your writing endeavours.