Comments on: Jake and The Stubborn Pencil – a Story for Children

By: DemonDogZack

DemonDogZack — Sat, 22 Jan 2011 23:21:11 +0000

If you can’t get another pencil threaten to break it and then it will do what you say!

By: Val Mills

Val Mills — Sun, 16 Jan 2011 02:04:34 +0000

Thank you, Erin. I’m glad someone has found it to read it again. One day I’ll have another go at getting it published. Meanwhile, it has a home here.

By: Erin Miller

Erin Miller — Sun, 16 Jan 2011 01:59:53 +0000

I wish I could have read this story when I was in elementary school. I read and write numbers backwards all the time. I am working on it though. I think my brother Zack would love this story. He has dyslexia with words but it technically applies to both of us. This story of yours should have been published!

By: nightcharmer

nightcharmer — Thu, 03 Dec 2009 15:52:29 +0000

Very well-written story indeed. Inspiring and heartwarming.

By: PhoenixRox

PhoenixRox — Wed, 02 Dec 2009 12:57:35 +0000

This is such a sweet story that deals with this learning disability. “He had shown his pencil who was boss”. That made me smile. I am not sure why it was not published. But I LOVE it.

By: Sharif Ishnin

Sharif Ishnin — Mon, 30 Nov 2009 10:54:39 +0000

Beautiful story. A joy to read. A good way to present learning disabilities in children.

By: valmnz

valmnz — Mon, 30 Nov 2009 02:39:30 +0000

Thank you.Written some time ago, but no one was interested in publishing it. Glad it will now be read.

By: Frances Lawrence

Frances Lawrence — Sun, 29 Nov 2009 23:28:59 +0000

This is a lovely story, I am going to send it to my nephew. Well written.