Comments on: Jimmy and Buck 2

By: Joni Keith

Joni Keith — Thu, 22 Jan 2009 00:38:54 +0000

Believe it or not, I took a vacation in Pacific Beach once. I loved it. Buck remids me a lot of a dog my son had. Best dog you\\\’d ever want to meet. Great story.

By: S A JOHNSON

S A JOHNSON — Wed, 21 Jan 2009 06:46:50 +0000

Nice Bo.

By: Inna Tysoe

Inna Tysoe — Wed, 21 Jan 2009 03:38:39 +0000

Funny and optimistic.

Inna

By: rutherfranc

rutherfranc — Wed, 21 Jan 2009 02:35:55 +0000

I got lost on the description.. funny

By: BoJack454

BoJack454 — Tue, 20 Jan 2009 19:21:06 +0000

Not really,Darren,I needed to get the boys and the dog to the beach,and wanted them to be off having fun by themselves,and you can’t take a dog on the bus here.So yeah,I crossed over a little bit,but have a new trick up my sleeve for next time.
Thanks everybody.Jimmy,it can be you if you want.

By: Sam Finch

Sam Finch — Tue, 20 Jan 2009 18:17:58 +0000

This is quite nice and optimistic. A kind of nostalgic wistfulness permeates every phrase. The story reminds me of what is/was like to be a 12 year old, and to great effect.

Truly good.

The strength of the bond between man and dog is something else.

By: Darren Goad

Darren Goad — Tue, 20 Jan 2009 18:11:58 +0000

Definitely getting better. Not quite sure of the Bo Jack Express. Are you crossing your personal genres?

By: PR Mace

PR Mace — Tue, 20 Jan 2009 17:37:06 +0000

Getting better, keep working on it. I like the Bo Jack Express. Maybe you should write a short story about a trip on the Bo Jack Express. I will read more later, I have to get ready for work now.

Later, Pam

By: Bick Parker

Bick Parker — Tue, 20 Jan 2009 14:24:32 +0000

Bo Jack Express, now that’s what I call using the imagination! Nothing like a trip to the seaside.

By: Sharona

Sharona — Tue, 20 Jan 2009 13:56:57 +0000

Fun read, keep up the good work.