A teenager’s review about life. Hope you enjoy reading!

Been living this life for almost 17 years now. Many people will say a girl or a boy in my age is still immature, and 17 years is still not enough to judge if he or she is mature or immature. Me? Maybe no, maybe yes.

In this 17 years of my life, maybe its enough time that I can say I’m already mature. I know there are still more years to come in my life.

  In my posts; Being The Eldest, Don’t Quit Until You Don’t Succeed, Dance With My Father and Nothing Beats Personal Experience just shows some part of my life. I have experienced so much difficulty not only as being the eldest in our family but also in many various reasons.

  My parents raise me to become independent in life and should not expect anyone except myself and they open my mind in reality. They never promise me of something that they can’t give.

  That’s why I conclude that life is a climb. The title of this post is based in one of Miley Cyrus‘ songs.

 *This post of mine is just a test. Test of my accuracy, imagination, spelling and grammar. I hope I have improved.

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  • No Share on Feb 20, 2011

    Great work Eds. Keep on writing. As my elementary teacher used to say, writing is a skill.

  • Christine Ramsay on Feb 20, 2011

    You are doing very well and should continue to write.

  • Ima Vee on Feb 20, 2011

    you’re improving Ed… such a great post…

  • mtrguanlao on Feb 20, 2011

    Oh definitely bunso! You really improved and keep it up!

  • papaleng on Feb 20, 2011

    I believe so bunso, However the right term should be you are maturing.

  • K Kristie on Feb 20, 2011

    Well said, keep writing.

  • Likha on Feb 20, 2011

    Go, go.. practice makes perfect. You’re doing a good job.

  • Lord Banks on Feb 21, 2011

    Stick with it! practise makes perfect. You may get good and bad comments on your work as you go along. If its a bad comment read the comment and work out if that comment is trying to help you? I used to be offeneded by negative comments, however if its by a fellow writer it will be for your benefit. Good luck. LB

  • Brewed Coffee on Feb 21, 2011

    Edss, mental and emotional maturity has got little to do with the no. of years. There are those who are very young but they act and think like real grown ups. And then there are grown ups who act like children. It’s a matter of perspective and upbringing, I think. :-)

  • abatencila on Feb 21, 2011

    just continue to write………goodluck!

  • shobhana on Feb 21, 2011

    It takes guts and the right spirit to venture where many 17 year olds fear to venture. Good work Edsss

  • LJ Spain on Feb 21, 2011

    I dont see a thing to complain about. I really like the article. You are doing great!

  • Erin Miller on Feb 22, 2011

    You have definitely improved. Keep up the good work and good post and good choice of a song for it! :)

  • Edsss on Feb 22, 2011

    Thank you for the very nice comments! I appreciate it so much.

  • anndavey650 on Feb 22, 2011

    Life can be a bit of an uphill struggle… but it’s all worth it in the end!

  • d1dezire on Feb 25, 2011

    nice article. life indeed is a climb

  • lmonline on Mar 4, 2011

    well done great work

  • Michael Eboh on Mar 22, 2011

    wonderful read. Thanks.

  • lian rosa on Apr 15, 2011

    Life indeed is a climb. At least you have nowhere to go but up (make sure it is always towards that direction). :)

  • Roe2115 on Apr 15, 2011

    Well-written post.

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