Tommie Girl could feel a strong vibration of care from Benny and Benny could feel it from Tommie. They both had Christian love for each other. Copyright © 2007 by Gail Nobles.

Tommie Girl did not want to say yes, but she hated to say no. “Well, I hate wearing dresses.”

“You don’t have to wear a dress. Go there as you are,” said Benny.

Tommie Girl was not feeling good about life at all. She felt that she needed to go into a place of worship. “Well, okay. I will go with you, Benny. But, I don’t won’t to enter into a church dressed like this. I wouldn’t feel right. I think I have a skirt and blouse to wear. Let me go home and change.”

Benny felt happy. “Great! Meet me at the park. I will wait for you there.”

Soon Tommie Girl was at the park with Benny in her skirt and blouse. She was still wearing her glasses so Benny wouldn’t recognize her.

“You look very nice, Falcon,” said Benny starring at Tommie.

Tommie Girl (Falcon) said, “Thank you”. She was feeling very shy.

Tommie Girl and Benny had a great time at the church. They left the church feeling good about being single after Bible study. Tommie and Benny walked back to the park together.

Because it was dark, Benny wanted to walk Tommie Girl to her home.

Benny said, “ Let me walk you home”.

Tommie Girl started wishing that she wasn’t single. She did not want to leave Benny, and she did not want to go home. Little Benny could sense it. Tommie said, “I don’t think walking me home is a good idea.”

“I don’t want anything to happen to you,” said Benny.

“You are a good Christian guy. I wish that all men were like you,” said Tommie.

“You are pretty special yourself,” said Benny. “I would like to see you again”.

“Okay,” answered Tommie quickly. “Don’t worry about taking me home. My ride is here. If it be God’s will, I will see you tomorrow. I will be right there at the corner store. You know where to find me.”

Tommie Girl had called a taxi to pick her up. When she had got into the taxi, Little Benny had a strange feeling about the taxi driver. Tommie Girl did not want to leave Benny and kept looking back at him. Benny did not want to wave goodbye because he was afraid he wasn’t going to see her again. Tommie Girl could feel a strong vibration of care from Benny and Benny could feel it from Tommie. They both had Christian love for each other.

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  • Loretta Johnson on Jul 9, 2007

    I thought that was a really great story. It really seemed like Tommie Girl and Little Benny really cared for each other. Are you going to write another part to the story? I wonder if they will get together after all.

  • Gail Nobles on Jul 9, 2007

    Yes, there will be another part. Little Benny is a sequel.

  • Jessica Fike on Jul 18, 2007

    I just bookmarked you, very fun, interesting stuff to read, nice work!

  • Gail Nobles on Jul 19, 2007

    Hi Jessica! I’m so glad you like my work. If you are writing at Triond, I will be checking out your work too.

  • Lucy Lockett on Jul 21, 2007

    The characters of these people is being built up very nicely, you have done a good job.I look forward to reading more about them, to see where it is all going.

  • Gail Nobles on Jul 23, 2007

    Lucy,thanks for being a great fan of my work. I love your work too.

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