A couple of teens go on a road trip.

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It all started back when we were in the 12 grade summer break.Me and a couple of friends went on a road trip.did not know were we were going. we were just going so we got a check list beer,food camera, money, and the green stuff. Got it, all so we hoped in the mini van. We were on are way on the interstate. trying to have fun stopping every were bars clubs any thing we saw just haven fun. Then we see an exit that says fear. net.the ultimate scare turn here.So we exit start driving don’t see anything. It was dark and spoke thought we to OK a wrong turn. Then we see a sign that said fear.net no return so we looked at each other.Like what the f**k.this a long dark road no gas stations no nothing.

Then the car stops’s its about 8 pm. and 800 miles from home. We try to start the car but it wont I looked at Chad and ask you let it run out of gas. Billy, Frank, got a little scared so we decide to wait in the car.For someone to come and help us I try to call dad on my phone but no signal there phones are dead.So I ask my self what the hell is going on why  did we take this exit!!!

We see headlights coming toward us we flag them down. He slows down rolls down the window and says death is among you. Then he speeds up we are starting to get a little worried. Its 9pm. no more cars I am getting this weird filling we are being watched.. I didn’t like this I told Chad frank is a sleep in the van and Brian is pacing back and forth. Chad is starting to talk all crazy i try to calm him down but is not working he wants  to go try to find help finally i told him OK but he has one hour..

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  • Lee Ness on Oct 30, 2009

    Very interesting story. Spooky and sad since you lost your friend Chad in this one. Very nice read.
    You talent. I wish I could write short stories.
    Thanks Lee Ness

  • cardy on Oct 30, 2009

    A good good story enjoyed the read nice work

  • Darla Cooke on Oct 30, 2009

    Very interesting story.

  • chitragopi on Oct 30, 2009

    Frightening indeed. Good story

  • alc on Oct 30, 2009

    Another great short story! Too bad Chad can’t read this!

  • Ruby Hawk on Oct 30, 2009

    Your story was intreresting. A good one for Halloween, great stuff.

  • Valerie Curtiss on Nov 3, 2009

    Spooky story.

  • Themax on Nov 4, 2009

    very nice story,Thanks for sharing :)

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